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I love this story! I have just gotten back into AFF after a few months and this was the first story i have read, but sadly there is no more of it!!! Please write more very soon!! I will be on the lookout for more of this story and your works!

Thank you for the story!
-Kii

write more. soon. i liked it.

This is a winner. I have to say that you have done an excellant job with this so far. I have really enjoyed the read. The mystery of it all is like an addictive drug... I want more. I need to find out the answers! Great writing. You have a splendid plot going here; one that is obviously well thought out. Though I look forward to your update on 'Paths', I am now excitedly looking forward to the next installment of 'My Enemy'.

Rinseternalsoul

Holy mother of God...

While I only have time to read the first chapter right now, I've read enough to be immediately sucked in. Ho-ly...WOW. Your description is BEAUTIFUL. It's like you write with a paintbrush. Each word is deliberate and perfectly placed, making the story roll out like thunder; it gets quicker and more frenzed as the action moves closer. You've already built up solid characterizations and motivations, and planted the seed of an epic considering your allusion to Sesshoumaru's past and him witnessing his family's death. And I'm eager to learn more about what kind of being Kagome is, and how their combined efforts will play into their fight against this new evil (for that mater, is the giant violet-gray blob even evil or just some random thing?). Oh my goodness, BM, I love WTPE, but THIS fic is just astounding. I adore it!

Yes , definately please add me to your list , i love the story so far.
Sessho better suck it up and take care of kagome lol it's funny to think of him as a person that feels confused lol

Well Babs, I must say that I'm glad this story is back in motion. I really love the way you put Sesshy in an emotional termoil, his rude tail needs some shake up. Kykio, Oh! the most hated female of this cast, She's gone dark? But this moth demon, he's like a joke to me. I guess I'll have to wait and find out whats going to happen next! You Go Girl! Loving this so far!

Pleasant surprise seeing you have updated. I like the way the story seems to be developing, it looks like they will have to be staying togeather for a while yet before any relationship developes, your not pushing it. I think this is going to make for some interesting moments, and a whole lot of good reading. Can't wait until you divulge what Kagome's role is exactly in this story. Thanks

This chappi was as great as always and i didn't get a preview of anything sry update soon

loves arry

Your such a good writer way better than me but I really want you to update this story as well plz when You fine time can you do so plz I'm dying here I love this story
email me when you do so thankies

loves arry

I mean what a RUDE AWAKENING! Do my boy Sesshy know how to be anything else but rude? But we love him anyway. I'm courious abut this entity that caused both worlds to crash? Sesshy swears it was Kagome. Like always his temper was "king". I know my girl Kagome is not dead, but I think she want him to think she is and be away from him until tempers calm. Again you painted a beautiful picture in my mind. I wish I was an artist I would love to honor your story in pictures. I'll wait as long as it takes for updates, you just keep on writing well as you have. Love and Peace to you!