rate_review Reviews

I think that it was a very nice fic. You don't find too many good Sango/Miroku fics out there, at least I haven't. I'm sorry that only two people had reviewed when you posted that last authors comment. I know how that is. I would have reviewed before now if I had read the story before now, but I am reviewing now. I really did enjoy it, Shippou's reaction is just to cute. Of course he would know about mating, but not necessarily about the human aspect of it. I think you did a good job with this one. Keep up the good work. :)

Dude, don't do that, do NOT remove your story. I found interesting & clever the way you mixed the hentai parts with the comical ones.
NEVER GIVE UP.
Be confident of your self.

EL PICHO.

dont you dare. i will kill you personally if this fic is removed! no touchy... unless it is to write more. its good, and it is dealing with two of my favorite people who dont get many fics written about them... well,... atleast not compared to inu and kag... ohhhhhhhh, so sweet, inu is shippou's daddy! hahaha i can see the chaos now. continue please!! by the way, many people read and dont review b/c they think that it is good the way that it is, and they dont have any suggestions for the story.... atleast thats what my friends usually do... they only review if there is something important that they want to say. luv ya!

Don't feel too bad, Savannah! You didn't do a bad job on this story...not at all. ^_^ You did a good job if you ask me. The only complaint I would have is that some of the dialogue seems a bit...well...out of place in this time period. Miroku and Sango had a tendency to revert in and out of feudal and modern language and expressions. That's the only problem I would consider fixing.

But don't worry about it. Other than that I thought it was a wonderful, fluffy, lemony fic that was enjoyable to read. So no worries, neh?

Signed,
CarnalRhapsody

(aka-Jessic)

P.S I know how you feel actually. I have a poem about love-making called "Lover's Tryst" that I wrote and put on here and I haven't even got 1 review. So consider yourself lucky to have gotten 2. ^_^ Anyway, good luck on your writing! See ya!

good fic..sorry to hear no one reviews..if it makes you feel any better--i'm hardly a reviewer..but good job..

Yes please. Please to the lemon. The more lemony the better.

Oh... i love it. Miroku rules. Henace my address haha. Anyway, i love it so far and i want to read very soon (hopefully some lemon action) heehee. Post more very very soon. I can't wait to read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!