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for Body Heat

by amuckgirl

person Wolfenangel7288
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story, but be careful of your typing errors, it kinda gets confusing...But great otherwise. Wonderful plot...and who doesn't like to think of a naked Miroku?
person Iyasu
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*smirk* I can imagine Inuyasha's reaction once he gets a good whiff of her scent. That was a great fic, though, too bad it was all a dream... an unfinished one at that.
person Faerie Demoness
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fan-freakin-tastic! Oh my god, that was so good, and what a cliffie! Awesome. More, please you've got to write more soon. Loved it!
person hm
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A few spelling or grammar errors. Other than that very good.
person sky
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really thought that they were really fucking lmao. You should do another chapter. Like when he got back from getting the water they could talk and then YEAH!! I don't know what i am saying i just don't want this story to end.
person Carebear
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL! That was great! You had me. I never suspected that ending. I loved it. I can't tell you how big I'm grinning over here at the whole situation. I love Miroku, he's always good for a laugh. Can't wait to read more stories by you. Keep up the good work. ^_^
person ChromiumBlue
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! MORE MIROKU AND KAGOME STUFF!!!! YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person LC
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
~Droools~ a naked Miroku..... GODS! :)
I also hope she gets to complete her dream ;)
*cackles*

The men in "Inuyasha" are so darn sexy! argh!

PS. I liked it :D