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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is wonderful! I luv it. Umm.....would u mind email me when u post another chapter???please....u c i m not on my computer and i cant add to favorites. Thank you! ^^ I luv ur story! wonder what that "rapist" has in mind.....XD bye bye keep up the good work n i cant wait till nxt chapter
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January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I almost read your story, until I realized you had mispelled the main character's name. Any Inuyasha fan would know that it is SesshOmaru, not SesshAmaru. The o is long in Japanese. Get it right and you might actually have a story.
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yey! lovely story! to things: (1)the difference b/t "your" and "you're". (2)and at first i thought Rin was acting a lil young. kinda creeped me out at the beginning of the lemon. but then when she got her new powers she was more... challenging. towards sess. and that's cool. love the bad guy. well, love to hate him. you know. and it'll be fun to see what happens w/ rin's new powers. in sum: LOVE THE STORY! UPDATE SOON!
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is please update
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really good job with the lemon and the morning after...I didn't expect for her to be a demon.....so cool...next chapter soon please....How the hell is that monk going to try to take on a demon .......It should be good.
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December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT LEMON!!!!!!!!!!!!BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!! But wasn't there someone in his chamber???? and even if he was distracted by Rin ...shouldn't he smelled them after their mating????????....update soon please
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December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GREAT update please come back soon with more.:)
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story keep it coming. MUST HAVE MORE:)
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i just started reading your story today and then i got to the Author Note HOW COULD YOU STOP THERE! so im review saying i love your fic and you better continue!
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool!
Update soon!
Update soon!