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for A First for Everything

by TheNikkitch

person Sarah
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear NavelOrange,
I just wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying this fic. I generally don't like non-traditional pairings, but this one is spectacular. You have well established characters which are not completely contradictory from the anime as well as a very clean writing style. I am extremely impressed by what you have done so far and can hardly wait for further updates.
sincerely,
a fellow fan
person Megan Consoer
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person starlet angel
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
While I'm not exactly a big fan of this pairing, I must admit, I'm really enjoying your story. It's stories like this one that get me interested in this combination. Keep it up! <0^-^0>
person Cassie
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love thsi story I downloaded it from fanfiction.net and I couldn't find the lemon chapter so I'm glad that you are writing it on AFF.net so I can finally get to read the lemons. Thanks u so much for writing it and the lemons now I can read the juicy stuff and will you go all the way to chapter 15 like you did on fanfiction.net.
person Julia
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I first say this story at a single spark, and really like it
I can't wait to read the rest of it.
Update soon and more than the 12 chapters that are on a single spark
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit..hahaha I almost missed this story being updated!!
Oh this chap. (3)is good, I love seeing Sessy being Sessy basically!
Great job!! Please continue and update soon!!
person Jen
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's great, very good. I think that you have written one hell of a story. Write mor soon, please. I can't wait
person Jennifer
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HEHE!! Absolutely love the plot twist!! Update soon!!
person YoukaiNMe
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG...
" He’s cold and emotionleso Iso I like to call him Lord Fluffy.” Hahahaha!!
Oh and the note..Just the way you would picture Sesshoumaru acting..Love it!!
Really good chapter, I hope you continue on with this story..I love seeing Sesshoumaru as thed lod lover!
Love the plot twists you are adding to it, got me interested!!!
Please update!!

person YoukaiNMe
schedule October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I gave it 5 stars!!
I think its great, pleasel keep writing!!

You sure fooled me,saying this was your first Inu fic!!
And I have read a ton of them!!
Please update!!