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for A First for Everything

by TheNikkitch

person Kat
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing!! I liked it!!!
person Arianna Whitebolt
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was debating as I was reading whether or not I wanted to review each individual chapter or just wait till I got to the last posted chapter. The debate was finally ended as my brain came up with the conclusion that to review each chapter would take valuable time away from reading the next chapter so it concluded it would be more beneficial to review the last chapter. So here I am, finally done (and rather sad about it) and reviewing the story. I have got to say, this is a really interesting and well thought out story, at least in my opinion. I just have one question from a previous chapter: Is Sesshoumaru really unable to have children or did he just tell that to Kagome to appease her? I was kinda hoping that you could e-mail me and let me know when you update this story, it would save me from having to check back everyday and sift through all the other stories to see if you've updated. I really like this story and read the whole thing in one shot, only taking a break long enough to grab a drink, something to eat and bring it with me so I could continue reading unhampered. Hope you update soon, you've got something good going on here!
person Megan Consoer
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!
person LIL Riri
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story so far. A lustful, hateful relationship theres nothing better. I think it would be kind of ironic if kagome got pregnant but thats just me. I kind of envy kagome but she doesn't know how much power she has over Sessh wich is sad but I LOVE THE STORY SO FAR and i can't wait to see what kind of twists are going to be added. UPDATE SOON your faithful fan Lil Riri
person Jennifer
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man...you gotta review...i read this a long time ago and was excited to see it again!! Update!!!
person Anon
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good update. i like the miroku/sango thought! you should bring her in.
person Laini
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!.i think ur doing great w/ sesshomaru's character too!...he is a sexy beast tho after all lol.well update A.S.A.P. i cant wait to read more of it :)
person cassandra
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i like it please update soon.
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story just gets better and better!
Ohh the elevator with Sesshoumaru
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