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for Fragments of Broken Pride

by Areitus

person Shinna
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this story. I look forward to reading the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon
person Jen
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have only gotten to chapter 3 of your story but i thought i would review you. I love it so far and i as i read more i know that i will only like the story better.
person Kalen
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's been so long since you last updated, I hope you haven't given up on this fic. I really love the story you have going, your writing style is excellent. Keeping Sesshy IC is very hard, and your doing a great job with him and all the chars. I really hope you continue with this fic as I belileve it would be a shame to let it fade away, unfinished.

Please update soon......

K
person Midnight_Mistress
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dang it...this is torchure....Inuyasha and Kagome deserve to have some intimate time with each other...they've been through so much......love it so far...let me know when ur next chapter's up by sending me an email if it's not an inconvenience (can't spell) with you....^_^......

ME WANT MORE...MORE, MORE, MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Twilight
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great manga! I want to know how everything works out for Sesshomaru. And let Naraku die for his evilness!
person SP777
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm feeling....kinda bad now, after chap. 8.

So much has happened to Sesshoumaru in a span of eight days and I'm suprised he hasn't sapped yet.

Where is that light at the end of the tunnel???...and will Inuyasha be able to control his feelings????
person SP777
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that word should be 'snapped' not 'sapped'.
person MeMe
schedule July 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love your story. Please update soon!! Is there any way to be notified of your updates? If so, please tell me!!
person The Dragon
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NUUUUUUUU!!! Rin CAN'T die!! No, no, NO! It was bad enough that you made her blind (while killing Anuh and Jaken as well), but to kill her now?! You have to have a way planned that they can bring her back, maybe even her sight as well! Sesshy needs Rin! NEEDS HER, you hear me?!?! *cries*
person Levii
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Angst is good, I love this story. You write sooo well! I can't wait for the next chapter, but I'll be patient. Here, I award you with a big cookie and Sesshomaru plushie in honor of this great story (and as a bribe to your muse for you to update soon).

Levii ^_^