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for Fragments of Broken Pride

by Areitus

person me
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ack!!! You're ending there?!?!?!?! Ugh! It was getting sooooo good then too! Oh well, I guess I shall wait patiently for you to update. It better be soon though! Cots ots on such a well written story!
person wheezambu
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeeehaa! That last chapter was hot, I damn near fell off me chair! Felt so bad for Sessh, never seen him so beaten down....it was awful. Not your writing, that was good. But I stuck thh ith it because I knew there had to be some yaoi coming up (pun intended). And it was worth it! I'm just a crazed yaoi fangirl....cool story, write more like it!!
person sutlesarcasm
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, now. I have read a few Inu/Sess/Kag fics, but none that have kept me this interested. What are you planning on having this go. At this point, Inu seems to care for Kagome, but is more enthralled with Sess, who at this point seems to be restrested only in Inu Yasha. You are doing a very good job with this fand and I hope to see you continue to update. The story line is consistant, the dialog is smooth, and very well put together. By the way, thanks for giving Sess back his pride, I just couldn't stand having him so lost and down trodden. Hopfully you will make this a true Inu/Kag/Sess fic. I don't review often, but I really wanted to encourage you to continue. You have talant.
person richonyx
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What the f--? Nothing to say? THS A S A FRIGGIN GREAT STORY! I will beat you with a bloody stump if you discontinue! I'm happy the brothers finally got together (great lemon, by the way), and I'm interested in seeing how lil' Miss Kagome fits into all of this. Oh, and I thought you were masterful with the beginning--Naraku, Rin, the heartbreak (OK, I was really crying with that one). The plot is great! The smut is better! Please don't make me hurt you to get my point across! Continue, continue, continue!
person snowfall
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I've been waiting for an update on this story. Love it. The descriptions are so detailed, the emotions, the action, the lemon.
It's obvious that you've worked hard. Keep it up.
person KogasHentaiLuver
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a great lemon. Nicely done. Really hot and sensual. I just loved the banter they shared at the end. How funny. Inu was so in character with the playful banter. I really enjoyed it and can't wait for more.
person Shini Neko
schedule October 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sugoi...You know, I've been finding some rather horrible stories on AFFN. I have to say that yours is so far one of the best that I've read. My desire to find InuYasha fanfiction is still strong, and finding good authors of my pairing is hard to do. Congratulations on how detailed (And gory O.o;) you've managed to make it, without making it seem overflowed. If you could, email me when you update? It's really really sadistic to have to wade through pages of AFFN's InuYasha things to find your story.
person KogasHentaiLuver
schedule October 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really great story. I think you've done a wonderful job describing all the feelings and emotions that are going on with Sess and Inu. I'm also thrilled to see the beginning of the lemon between Sess and Inu, I hope. You're a fantastic storyteller. Keep up the terrific work. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person aphinna
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This an amazing fanfic can't wait to read somemore chapters update soon
person shameika
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome fanfic please update soon