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for Fragments of Broken Pride

by Areitus

person misticrose1
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story i hope you update real soon.
person Anon
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So awesome!!!!! But I want to see an Uke Sesshoumaru!!!!! Look that face!!!!! The man was build to be an Uke ^_____^.
person Stefanie
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It has been hard to find really good Sesshoumaru/Inuyasha stories and am glad that I found yours. ^_^

I do have one problem with it though and that's Kagome. -_- In your summary you've writen M/F which I take to mean Inuyasha/Kagome, and then F/M/M which I think means Kagome/Inuyasha/Sesshoumaru. -_- Do you really have to involve her like that? Can't she be shoved into the background and forgotten? ^_^ Sess/Inu FOREVER!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! *cough*

Okay I'll stop now...
person Bgatorgirl86
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE your story....seriously. It's definatly one of the best I've read in a looooong time!

Keep up the good work!

~A beloved fan~
person Stefanie
schedule November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, please keep writing. ^_^
person Calix of Heaven
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the story...I read it before. Please continue writing that was the best slash I read in awhile....I don't normally read slash but ohwell. To be honest I'm more a henteadeeader that reads M/F/M threesomes. Wow I realy am a pervert...keep up the good work.
person ladykaa28
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I do apologize for not reviewing like I should. I have been very busy lately at work. But in the last two chapters I would have to say that they were amazing. To see Sesshoumaru have so many emotions and not fight against them was wonderful. To me it made him a bit more touchable with out losing the regal effect. I also liked how you made Inuyasha turn human during this, because it just helped in my opinion with Sesshoumaru allowing his brother to see him smile and laugh. If you don't hear from me as often, please don't think that I have forgotten about you. It's Christmas time at work and I run the Christmas shop. Until things slow down just a bit I'll be just a little late with the reviews. Aand most likely review more than one at a time.
person Anon
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what Kagome would say if she saw this Maybe she'd think it was getting very hot in there ^__^
person beth
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! Don't leave it at that cliffy!!!! You have a great story here and it definitely deserves more reviews than it has. So, igomegome gonna walk in on Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru?? Hehe. Can't wait for the next update!
person snowfall
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and cry for Sess. He is so heartbroken. I hope this isn't the end. I want to see a full recovery for the Lord of the Western Lands. I want my hanyou marked, dammit! And, I want to see Kagome's reaction. You have more writing to do, uh huh. Lovely story, and such insight into the emotions of each character. Keep up the good work. If this isn't posted in the yoai section, it needs to be.

Snowfall aka hanyou slave