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for Fragments of Broken Pride

by Areitus

person Calix of Heaven
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read this fic whenever I find it....even though i don't normally read yaoi....Good job. Please cointinue with this fic it is a good one and I like reading it.
person Ceres
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update soon!!!
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, You've definitely got my attention. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
person Loki
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So far Ithink its very good ,and that really like it no love it if they loved Kagome as much as they love eachother. I think it would be perfect since they would all get all the love they desearve times two. Not to mention the extremly hot, cute,and sweet sex they could have. So PLZ PLZ PLZ let them love kagome as much as they love eachother. I was also wandering if and when kikyo was going to show up (Plz don't let them any of them be mached with her. I mean at least not in this fic. I think this fic is great with it being I/K/S pairing, pluse I just don't think a kikyo paring would fit this fic.) and iff she does I can't wait to see if shes put to rest, if shes just really cold, or if shes evil and trys to kill kagome or Kagome along with everyone else. Also I was wandering if and when Koga shows up and how Sess and Inu react to him cheking on His (Koga's) woman. That seen could be funny as hell. And I was wandering if Sess would go through the well with Inu and Kagome(could you imagen her grampas reaction to a full demon or better yet the full demons reaction to the demon) or if not go through the well his reaction to learning about the well and its power. Last but not least If you make Inu, Kagome, and Sess are a trio could you make it where Kagome lives as long as Inuyasha and Sesshomaru? Now that thats out of the way I would just like to say thank you for writing and sharing your wonderful story with everyone, and that even if you don't make it an Inu/Kag/Sess fic ( oh the pain at the thought it would be so perfect Plz if you haven't already just think about it.) I sure that you know what your doing, and I will continue to read this story. I'm sorry if I seem over opinionated( I know I spelt that wrong and yes I know it's sad so sorry.) but you seemed to want to know our thoughts and feelings about the story so thats what I put. I also made this long since you said you didn't get many reveiws. So thanks again for the story Plz update soon
person Black Raven
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very Cool Story, there is gonna be more, right?...RIGHT?!?
person snowecat
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why worry about how many reviews you've gotten? Finish it for the sake of the story itself and for no other reason. It's so sad about Rin. What about Kagome, will she figure into the brother's joining? I think it'd be cool if they both mated her. Will you be continuing on this any time soon?
person Denisse
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your history is ESPECTACULAR!!!!!! but you don't have a lot of reviews because you publish it together. The people who has many reviews is because they publish their histories chapter by chapter.
So... let me tell you something.
YOU ARE REALLY GREAT AND YOUR ART IS THE BEST!!!!!!!!!!
You are an amazing writer.
Please, continue soon
person thoth_moon
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
.........incapable of putting thoughts into decent legible commentary. Story so damn good I'm at a loss of what exactly to say. Very creative. You stayed true to the characters' personalities. Awesome. Love it. Looking forward to an update.
person vashta
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When is Kagome going to get in on this? Surely you wouldn't leave her out! Are you working on a new chap? Has this been discontinued? I hate when that happens, even if it is a story I don't really care for, if I have kept up with it I want to see an end. Oh, I do like this story though, this is the first MM I ever read.
person richonyx
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love this story so much! I really loved the last chapter when the two brothers finally let go of their sexual tension. Please update soon--I really would love to read more of your story!