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for Fragments of Broken Pride

by Areitus

person Wow
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great! Wonderful! I'm not sure how to write everything that I feel--I've been waiting for an update for so long that I just wanted to drop a few lines of encouragement. I would love to see how you develop the relationship (if there is one) between Sess, Inu, and Kag. I'd love to see it and think it's been a ling tone coming. Anyway, keep up the good work!
person Jingles
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE FUCK!? Your stopping thair of all places? My god thier most be a law or sothing agnst crueitly(?) to readers. You must update soon I'm to hooked to stop reading.
person Inny
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is awsome! Please do continue, I want to see what happens next. =^.^=
person snowfall
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, for shame, Kagome! This will certainly be interesting!
person Elise(Demon Childe)
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is an incredibly powerful piece. Normally I'm not one for incest, or yaoi, but it was done so well I was just drawn in. Keep writing stuff like this and I'll never get off the computer. Keep it up!!(BTW bravo on your grammar and spelling. That can really take away from a story.)

Elise
DC
person hanyou slave
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I found the chapter with human Inu in bed with Sess sweet and at the same time amusing. I look forward to reading the other chapters you have posted.
person Catchfire
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great you finally updated. So will it be that Sess gets both Inuyasha's and Kagome's virginity separately or will Inuyasha walk in and catch them? Embarrassing the hell out of Kagome and maybe Sess asking if he'd like to join them with a smirk on his face. Which hopefully he will do. Or perhaps they will make love fall asleep in each other's arms and then Inuyasha will walk in in the morning waking them up and then getting the invitation from Sess to join them or perhaps smirking and asking if he can join in. Which they or Sess anyway will say yes to. Also I think that Inuyasha should think things over in the woods about the differences in the way that Sess acted the night before and the way he acted in the morning and come to the realization/conclusion that Sess is just trying to push him away. So that he won't get hurt again. But whatever you do please let it have a happy ending with the three of them together. Although I hope that they all get together and then the story lasts a lot longer. Maybe with them hunting down Naraku. Along with lots of lemons in the meantime. It would be interesting to see what the others thought of the three of them being together especially Shippou. I wonder if he would ask Kagome if he now has two Daddy's? Now THAT would be interesting! So Great Story it's one of my favorites and keep up the great work!!! I just love this trio and there aren't nearly enough fics of them.
person Rosa
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
N-No!You had to end it there?! Please update soon!
person DarkMystic
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Stayed up till almost three am reading this story, and I love every chapter of it. Poor horny sesshoumaru..*Sniffles.* And I didnt even get to see the sex between kagome and sessy! Darnit, you have to write the rest, because...Well, I said so mnn!*Sticks her tongue out at writer.* Now get to writing. *Pushes in the direction of the computer.*
person Golden
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yea, I think I remember reading part of this story on another sn. Wow... It just keeps getting os much better... It's so damn depressing, I just love reading this stuff... And SessxInu is always a plus. Gotta feel so bad, for ALL the charaters in this story. Mainly Sesshoumaru, Inuyasha, and Kagome. They are doing as much as they can for the youkai lord, and he seems to be getting better... I sure hope he is. Wow, and he goes from fucking his brother one night and then the very next night, he goes on to get Kagome. Wow. Can't wait to see what will happen next. Will Inuyasha stumble in on them and feel rejected to the highest degree by Sesshoumaru? Or will he be, shall we say, inticed by it? I can't wait for you to update again!!!!!!

TTFN! Ta Ta For Now!