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for Fragments of Broken Pride

by Areitus

person Snowfall
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ach! I like this story so much, but you haven't updated in a long time. Please update. You write so well and I love this story. The plot is so intriguing.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
person Alexandra
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to stop right THERE, don't you? Right THERE at the stupid bloody cliffhanger of the year?! You evil, evil author! Update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!
person Snowfall
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have no idea when I lost track of your story, but OMG! Is Rin really back? Please don't let him lose her again. Oh pleeeease update soon. I was wondering what happened to this story. Wouldn't it be lovely if Kag, Inu and Sess kept a love triangle? Sheer and utter bliss.

Snowfall
person Kagome_miko_2004
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was just wondering if you were going to write more to this story? it was good what I had read so far, but I would like to read more. Please let me know. Thank you
person Crissy
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You probably won't update anymore but Rin's death and Sesshoumaru's reaction to it made me cry. I would have loved to see the next chapter.
person Jasmine
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Grrr, that is so evil! You make the story so good, then stop it in the worst spot (to the reader) possible. This is an amazing story. You've really brought the characters to life. Please, write more.
person lost child
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah! so good. Please update again soon
person The Empress
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, crap! A cliffhanger! Dang it! Please write more. I wanna know what's gonna happen next. Please. *big pleading eyes* And of course if you didn't know, I love this story. ^_^
person Ookami K
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this is one jammin fic.... Between the gorey, depression and the sex scenes I found that it made this story like no other..... I loved it.... I hate to think of the truce and what the cost would be but that I can leave to you in hopes that it will be a good chapter..... Until next time. Peace...
person Atropa
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, she was alive... and yet - there was a cliff hanger... you're an evil person... *pouts*
Anyways, this is a good story and I hope that you have many more chapters for me to read in the future...
The angst, depression and all that is very skilful described. You are doing a very good job.