rate_review Reviews

Hey! i really like your story! ^^ I like how you managed to keep sesshy still in character, despite the circumstances. Just a couple of things I noticed though.. in the first chapter you said he was on his hands and knees and that he lifted one arm to hold his stomach and I thought I should mention that sesshoumaru only has one arm, since inu cut the other one off. Also, in the second chapter you had Inuyasha retrieve Toukajin for Sesshy and I thought you should mention what happened to Tenseiga. But maybe that's part of your explanation of where Rin and Jaken are, i don't really know ^__~ well, anyway, sorry to sound kind of nitpicky ^^;;...great story!

I really like it so far. Keep up the good writing

I like this a lot! I can't wait to read more! Really good plot idea! Wish I'd thought of it... (grumbles)... An-nyways, I hope you update soon! I eagarly anticipate the next chapter!

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Very intersting fic. Please continue, I'd like to read what happens next ^__^

Now THAT was good. O_o

It kinda gave a twist in the 'Sesshoumaru/Inuyasha coming to terms' story I see every now and then...that and the fact I never read a story about Sesshoumaru getting his assets kicked THAT bad.

I hope you continue. I'll be on the lookout.

I like this story verrrry much. Keep writing, and if you would, separate the the speaking parts from the paragraphs. It would make it a lot easier to read. Thanks

I hope Inuyasha gets there in time to help Sesshoumaru. update soon