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for Fragments of Broken Pride

by Areitus

person AlesserBeing
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wtf, all these hits and hardly any reviews? *looks bewildered*
S'alright, i'll tickle 'em to death for ya ^.~
I, for one, liked this story. Can't wait to see more! lol

*huggles*
~Alesser*Being~

p.s..just make sure there's lotsa lemony yaoi-goodness, K? lmao..Thanx;D
A;D
person ladykaa28
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I't 't know about the other people, but I like it. I want to see just how you make it into a triangle between the three. So far I see it with Inuyasha and Kagome, then Inuyasha and just a little bit of Sesshoumaru, but how will it be for Kagome and Sess? I see that she cares for him because he is Inu's brother, but what else?
person Jade
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Write More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Write More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Need more story ^.^
WANT, NEED, HAVE, TO HAVE, SESSHOUMARU NAKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person beth
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story i love it please continue.
person Avid Reader
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you have 16 reviews now so yes people do like your fic I on the other hand LOVE your fic I just found it today and will maybe if I have time leave a review each time you up-date
person SP777
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know I had to read that 'I want a brother' part...ahem...TWICE before the meaning sunk in. :-)

But I do like your continuity and how it flows....uh can I go on a limb and say you won't be pairing up Lord S' in this, will you? Because I'm all about Kagome & the cutie with the puppy dog ears. o___o

Also, I feel Sesshoumaru should have part of his arm back, too, after a long period of time. I mean what's the point of being FULL youkai if you can't heal a missing arm a little faster than usual?
person Gaby
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I k yok you stick to their characters very well. I also like the fact that you have Seshy and Inuyasha treating each other with an ounce of respect (for once). I have not seen many fics do that and make it convincing. I think this fic has a lot of potential and I hope you continue it. Hope this review helps!
person kaora
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah i like this fic, just don't bring seshoumaru's trust too quickly, not too OOC if ya get me. and i lopve sesh/kag fics, so make it into a kag/sesh fic! lol. poor inu but yeah,hey. bye!
person Lady Tennyou
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like I like!! aww... Sesshy granted Inu's request!! yay! I hope they still argue though.. it would be weird if Sesshy started making dinner.. or.. washing clothes.. o.0 lol update soon please!
person Shinna
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a really interesting fanfic. Can't wait for the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon

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