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June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was an excellent chapter. Towards the end I was in tears. I wonder what could of killed Rin? Can't Sesshoumaru bring her back with his sword? Keep up the good work. update soon
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
JUST "WOW!!!!!" CHP.8 ALMOST CRYED.
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tell me where is Tenseaga? Why could Lord Fluffy not save Rin's eye sight with it? AND WHY, WHY KILL OF HIS RIN!? She was the only thing keeping him sane. I liked this story up until you killed the girl. Hasn't she been through enough?
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thank you so much for updating. i love your writing. please keep up all your good work.
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
After reading this, I'm definitely feeling the pain of Sesshoumaru and longing of Inuyasha for family, but I must say 'does Sesshoumaru HAVE to be put in a relationship?'
I think the story is doing fine w/o such a thing with the focus on angst and revenge. I just want to see how the characters will develop in this, I guess.
I think the story is doing fine w/o such a thing with the focus on angst and revenge. I just want to see how the characters will develop in this, I guess.
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June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg, that last scene was beautiful. i started crying at once. please update soon.
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very restresting story you have here. There is one error that I would like to point out if no one else has already. In chapter 5, you make a statement about Sesshoumaru reviving with the sword Toukajin. That is his evil sword. It is actually the sword Tenseiga(not sure about spelling) that is the healing sword. This seems to be a very long story. Especially since there has not been very much touchy feely interaction between any of the characters. Poor Rin. I would have liked to have had a little warning that that kind of angst was coming. Well, enough rambling. Update soon. Can't wait to see how this progresses. TTFN
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June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ow! Tw! This is a really great story! Please keep writing soon! I really want to know what happens next to poor little Rin! Noone ever writes for her and it's so sweet!
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May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. It delves into the character's psyche with much detail. I await the next chapter!
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May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have followed your story and i am very intriged of what you are leading your characters into. will thee be a Sesshoumaru kamoge romance? will Rin survived???
Well, keep on writing.
Well, keep on writing.