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by Vyncent

person Saphir Kitsune Youkai Girl
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I mostly read your story on the 'A Single Spark' site,
but I don't really have any e-mail adress, so I'll just
put my review on this one. I just LOVE your story, your
writins style and vocabulary make me envious of your
skills. I just love how you made Kikyo pay for her
mistakes. Also, will you include Kouga in your story line?
I can't wait to see how the others will react to the depress
Kagome. Anyway, update as soon as you can!!!!
person snofall
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. You delve quite a bit into the ice king's psyche and Kagome finally reacts to all of Inuyasha's idiocy. Hope she doesn't make a stupid wish. Look forward to the next chapter. BTW, excellent grammar.
person ejqHorseLady
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing fanfic. It easily slipped into my favourites catogery. I'm glad you get so many chapters up at one time. I can't wait for your next update. May I make a suggestion? Have Kagome bow down before Inuyasha and ask for his forgiveness. Then he can truly see the damage he has done. I hope you update again soon. I'm going to leave this review at A single spark as well. I will be following the story there.
person Saphir Kitsune Youkai Girl
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised you haven't gotten more reviwes
'cause your story is awesome. I absolutely love
it! I can't wait for an update, soooooo do one
as soon as you can! I'll be waiting! And of you
don't get a review from me, it's only because
I'm too lazy to do one...-_-;...
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Liz
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Great story so far! Great ideas. Love it alot. Could you email meh when you update? I reallyt tot to continue reading this story. Hope you update soon

With Much Love
Huggles
~Liz~
person Pallas
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, two more chapters!! I really like where this is going, and I feel so very sorry for Kagome... Whatever happened and whatever she saw, it must have put her into a shock or soing?ing? Maybe Inuyasha said or did something when he was dying that broke her spirit? And poor Shippo... Poor Miroku and Sango. I hope you'll update soon, because I really, *really love this!
person Nefra
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so sad but at the same time very interesting. It seems that you're showing the worst thing that could possibly happen to Kagome if she were the only surviving member of the group. I just found this fic yesterday and finished reading the last chapter just a few minutes ago. I'm at work and my co-workers are asking me why I'm crying. I'm not joking. I know this is gonna be a angst riddled fic but please...tell me those weren't Inu Yasha's parting words to her. Please, for the sake of my continued sanity, update quickly. I have to know what's gonna happen next.

Ja ne!

Nefra aka Jaxxia7
person Pallas
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, another story from you!! Yes!! And it so... fascinating! Please update soon! Because I just *love* animalistic!Sessshoumaru! ^_^