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November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so cute ;.; and sweet nice job
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was intertessting.
I really enyojed it!
is it over or will you write the meeting of Kagome and Sesshoumaru with her family?
I really enyojed it!
is it over or will you write the meeting of Kagome and Sesshoumaru with her family?
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is in INCREDIBLE story!! I read your name mentioned in the author's notes of someone else's stowho who had a very high opinion of your story) so I decided to check you out. I just spey eny entire day off reading, and I am just floored. This is so original, and so very touching. I'll tell you, I cried so many times during chapter 20 that I had to reread a lot of it!! I originally read this on Single Spark, but I decided to to comment here because it's so much more fun for everyone to SEE how many people love your story!! I thought I lucked into another chapter when I saw that this version has 21 but alas, it was just a mistaken duplicate chapter. Anyway, I love your style and originality, and I now look forward to spending my next day off reading the rest of your work. Thanks SO much for sharing!!!
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this y...y...is there going to be an epilogue? even so...you are soooo talented and i can't wait to read any others you have or will write...koodos
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November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
really good story i greatly enjoyed it however just my opinion but its a bit wordy and long winded you will say the same thing like ten times and different people will keep explaining things over and over as the reader they know whats going on and you don't need to let us listen in to all the explinations
just a little critism x.x; gomen
great story though!
just a little critism x.x; gomen
great story though!
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is so good!
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November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yo! I love this story! The last chapter was great! Sango and Inuyasha finally gome-ome--Hooray! And poor Kouga--he never knows when to leave well enough alone. For a moment there I thought you were going to have him cross paths with Kikyou and take her to be the pack whore or something (my hentai rules me most of the day), but I hope he isn't too badly damaged from his little disgraceful performance. Anyway, great story and looking forward to your next update!
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November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i have tried leaving reviews on mediaminer.org but the damn thing won't let them in even when i log in so i will place my reviews here.
ch 17 ~ kikyou, you got what you watned so deal wiht it, bitch! and kagome, hey she spoke! but i don't blame her, i'm worried whether or not she can see her family.
ch 19 ~ ha!! take that you pathetic excuse for a being!! ain't so high and mighty now, kikyou!! and kouga you braindead mutt!! man i like the guy but i think kagome should've lifted him high int eh air... then drop him on his head. stupid--canine!! inu has a thicker skull but shit at least he didn't push his luck! anyway glad he made a appearance and hey, next cahpter he'll get the stick outta his ass. though kinda wish sess would gut him jsut a bit...
oaky i better gm gem getting really bitchy. bye!
ch 17 ~ kikyou, you got what you watned so deal wiht it, bitch! and kagome, hey she spoke! but i don't blame her, i'm worried whether or not she can see her family.
ch 19 ~ ha!! take that you pathetic excuse for a being!! ain't so high and mighty now, kikyou!! and kouga you braindead mutt!! man i like the guy but i think kagome should've lifted him high int eh air... then drop him on his head. stupid--canine!! inu has a thicker skull but shit at least he didn't push his luck! anyway glad he made a appearance and hey, next cahpter he'll get the stick outta his ass. though kinda wish sess would gut him jsut a bit...
oaky i better gm gem getting really bitchy. bye!
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November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see that Kagome is being widely appreciated and so has begun healing her heart. That whole Kouga thing was great and I can't wait to see what Sango and Miroku are up to. Thanks for updating so quickly.
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November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wait..i thought kikyo lost her voice