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for Foolish Pride

by LadySethia

person Charles
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
realy, realy good almost make me cry so as we say '' felicitation ''(french) hope you can make one as much good but happy endind
person Kanzen ne Tsuki
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SO sad. I suppose he got what he deserved. But, so sad.

Tsuki-san
person Phoenix
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know you said Angst but I still wasn't expecting the end!! *many tears* That was sad... but probably very realistic...
person Silver
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is this a one shot because the way it ended was sooo wrong. and can u plzz explain to me the ending was it supposed to be that Inuyasha lives to be in Kags time and sees her marry or somehting, help im really confused about that.
person Midnight Sparrow
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well written but so, so sad......
person ~BLACK_N_PINK~
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad but it was really good!!!!!! Who did she marry hojo? lmao
person Jen
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohh!! Tears are falling down my face. That story was good. Very well wriiten. You did GOOD job