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by daniy

schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the story line hate the shaky writing and grammatical errors you have me guessing alot on the text and i don't like doing that and you also really should leave all comments toward the end bc its distracting but i love the story line and hope you update soon
person Faye megan
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very good and very interesting! hope to read more soon!
person chris
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME!