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by kittyonnails

person Anon
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person essie
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is great
person purple_rain_cloulds
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thats good I really thought the baby was going to die. Hope it lives!
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh mys gos going to be good!
person TheCritic
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thats ok I find sad endings way more interesting...even though I dont this fic is EXTREMLY sad, women have miscarriages all the time...even multiple, plus she was going to get an abortion anyway...and even sango has a chance of bearing children since there are countless reasons womens cycles can go off or seem to vanish altogether
I really like this story because it was unpredictable and more original then most fics like this "kagome accidently gets pregnant" although I feel it could of been longer and had more of "how" it happened and stuff it was painfully short and "right to the point" which doesnt exactly add points to your writting but all in all I find this a wounderful piece of work.
person Saya
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* That was sad....

Poor Inu...poor Kagome...

That was indeed a angsty and sweet story.

-saya
person essie
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg please update
person ~BLACK_N_PINK
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And I was hopeing they would keep it!! R they going to try again? What are they going to do with the baby clothers, well hope thats not the end update if not!!
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that so said why do the baby have to die.


dont'let the baby go
person Lea-chan
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow..sad o.O; are you continuing? or leaving it at that? good though, i sat as glued til the end.