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for Come Here Boy

by szmadad

person Wolf Demon
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought to put a lot of effort into and it was written very well.
person Nick F.
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice story!!
Yup. absolutely Inu/Kag all the way. Gotta love them!!
Write more, or do a sequel :)
person DelKaidin
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bravo very good!!! Ju com comment and a question about the "mating mark" ... Comment first - THANK YOU!!!! for not doing the bite thing. Question - I liked the Kanji over the scar, Kristin of www.kristinstudio.com did a pic named "Red Kanji" did you get your inspiration from that? J/C. If you did it is a great fanfic for a great pic.
person caged bird
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn. that was extraordinarily well written and very, very hot. i particularly loved the way you utilized the different points of view to convey the character's feelings. congratulations on a job well done. and write more!