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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, Bravo, I think you have a natural talent here, I hope you decide to write for Inu/Kag Lemon Fic cau cause you have a talent for it. ^_^
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is it Hot in here or is it just me, I think I might actually have to take a cold shower after reading this one. Please Write More.
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very Sensual, Excellent Details, and the ability to make the reader visualize the scene. One of the better Inuyasha & Kagome fanfictions on the website it will be my pleasure to continue to read your wonderful written stories and review them.
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why you don't think you're any good. When I finished reading this fic, the only word that came to mind was "AMAZING!!!" Please keep up the good work! I really think that you have the potential to become one of the great fanfic writers in the IY fandom!
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If this is your first story then you really do have some amazing writing skills.
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pleasssssssssssssssse think about posting a sl tol to this story.
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great and Hot.
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am fanning myself while reading the computer screen
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Little Inu thought this story was really, really out of this world.
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well I can think of only one word that comes to mind on this fic WOW!