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for Come Here Boy

by szmadad

person Pac Man
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dial 1-800 can I get me some more of this.
person Psy Face
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely one of the best I have ever had the opporunity to read.
person Sorena
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully written one-shot lemon, very hot and I loved how you kept the characters still in character throughout it. I really enjoyed it and I hope to read more of your work soon.
person Smittin Kittin (NLO)
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was beatiful...not just smut but a well writen romantic incounter! wonderfully done! thanks 4 sharing! ^_^ smooches kittin
person AngelHeart2122
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was an amazing story. I really enjoyed the slightly different approach to the very often used markings. I thought that your marking was different then most stories I have read. This was very well done and I would love to see more stories from you. Also as a side note I had read this story only minutes before seeing your review on one of my stories. I just thought I would say that because it was ironic to me. Thanks for the reviews on my story if yif you want to ask me more about the story feel free to e-mail me. Any way great story, please continue to write.
person LadyCatBailey
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am sooooooooo happy right now! *sniffles* My little girl is all grown up, posting smut fics of her own. I think I'm going to cry. *teartear* LMAO

All joking aside, this is really good, love. I wish my first first Yasha lemon had been this well thought out! And concendering no one curled up and died when they read mine (er, at least, I hope not...if I killed someone...dude, I'm soooooo sorry. *shameface*), you are going to be an instant hit! They shall flock to your feet!

Oh, and, OMG I'M FIRST REVIEWER. SWEET! *does first reviewer jazz dance*
person TLC
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent Lemon, I wish I was in Kagome position. I take the hanyou and never let him leave my bedroom!
person Alabaster Dragon
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I can really say is AWESOME!!!!
person Sexy Hanyou
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For your first Fanfic this is really good! Please post more stories in the future.
person Cold Demon Lord
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hot, Hot, and more Hot. This is truly a wonderful Hentai story.