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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice and well written. I think my screen started to fog up. ~_^
Ja ne!
Ja ne!
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!! that was amazing! i loved it. it was wonderfully delicious. please dont let this be a one shot. please please please add on to this and make it an on going fic.
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so emotional an yet so sweet, So caring and yet so dangerous. I loved it! i kinda hope that this wasn't a one-shot because I would like to see a bit more of this if you know what I mean. *sighs in a daydreaming state* I hope if this'll be a chapter story, you'll update soon and if it's not... then you'd better start writing another one pretty damn fast!
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it really getting hot in here. Lolz. Brilliant is all I can say right now. Please continue your fabulous work.
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that lemon was wow, i'm speechless all i can say is that u gotta take a cold shower after reading that one lol. but i loved the one shot.
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow.....wow.
that was hot. and the ending...i wanted to cry. that was wonderfuly written. everything just flowed together so nicely and there was a reason for it all, which is uber important. bravo for a wonderful scene. I can't wait to read your other stories.
~Ashes :-)
that was hot. and the ending...i wanted to cry. that was wonderfuly written. everything just flowed together so nicely and there was a reason for it all, which is uber important. bravo for a wonderful scene. I can't wait to read your other stories.
~Ashes :-)
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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome! Awsome! Awsome! Ann Rice couldn't have done it better! This was hot...scaldingly hot! But what about 'the morning after'? I was happy to read a good bit about the two of them finally getting it on. I enjoyed this very much.
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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an extremely well written story. Good work.
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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmmm what to say.........well just to let you know i'm going to be your first bad reviewer isn't that nice.Now first off i do like inuyasha/kagome pairings.The worst part about your story if you ask me was inuyasha's future appearence you have to realize that its almost impossble for him to ever look like that, maybe if he was 10 but he's like 16 or something(not including 50 years tied to a tree) and he'll probobly grow another inch maybe two and he might look a little more greek god like but its unlikely unless he had like implants(besides i find a bronze color very ugly on him).One last thing about this how would he get a tan.....if he lives in the sunshine.......and he doesn't have a tan.......where would it come from?Next someone said thank you for not doing the bite mark mating thing but isn't it a little better than their name? If they aren't named by nature how would it know their names at least the bite mark is something(mostly) given by nature and is therefore more realistic.They were pretty in-character but they were pretty unemotional i mean sure u gave detail but it was lacking something.Last but not least i'd give your story a 3.5 out of five and it was pretty good but you don't have very good potenial unless you can find some creativity and get someone to help.Because theres nothing wrong with you that can be fixed by practice alone.Sry but i felt it had to be said and i hope you take into consideration what i've said.(And in my personal opinion it seemed kinda sad rather than romantic for some reason maybe u can perk up your writing a bit)