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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
off the chain
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey baby gurl you are doing good so far when will put the next chapter up come don't keep me waiting!!!!
i know that not my email i just think of you and all the sexy thing you do
for all you other people check out http://members.blackplanet.com/blue_fire_2004 or http://members.blackplanet.com/blue_luv1920-14 and see the skill my baby have.
get it bitch
i know that not my email i just think of you and all the sexy thing you do
for all you other people check out http://members.blackplanet.com/blue_fire_2004 or http://members.blackplanet.com/blue_luv1920-14 and see the skill my baby have.
get it bitch
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November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gurl whatis going on where the rest of your story. i like it very much keep it up.
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!! I read the part that you changed and as always i love it. I thinl it's very well wriiten. *gives a rose to the author* I can't wait to read more
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You use way too many author's comments- it is very distracting and takes away from your story. You should also work on longer chapters- without the author's notes you only have 1/2 a page of story.
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like your story so far!!! Plz update soon!!
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
look i'm on the web. i want more web time ok much love
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this story, it sounds good, keep writing and posting i can't wait to read more