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for Pain of her Heart

by inuyashagemini

schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my what am i'm going to do with this mess
person Megan Consoer
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
person Mellissa
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It seems you are working on it a little at a time because the first chapter is a HELL of a lot better then the last. A couple of words were spelt so incorrectly I couldn't figure them out from context. Good start so far and maybe you should erase some of the negative comments others left that no longer apply (you've gotten rid of a lot of the crap they were complaining about). Good start so far.

By the way, it's driving me insane: charter = CHARACTER (in your disclaimer)