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October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update soon please
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is great! plz plz plz e-mail me when part II is up. plz!
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow
I'm pleasently surprised, thoungt about it like another he takes her story.
but you made a interessting change...
I'm pleasently surprised, thoungt about it like another he takes her story.
but you made a interessting change...
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you really really have to continue this. it is an awsome story! i love the way you set up Sesshomaru and Rin for a relationship. I am still uncertain what you are planning to do with the stuff in the modern era, but it is good nonetheless. Keep up the goodwork!
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's off to a great start. Sesshomaru seems ttlettle wordy, but his other characteristics seem dead on, and Rin is perfectly charming :)
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Jakented ted Rin to his self this is a great fanfic please update soon
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Um nice story. I am curious to where this is going
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very intersting story. I hope that it is not a one-shot story. I hope they will be more. Update soon.
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey this story is nice. C wai wait for an update
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I found this to be a very engrossing read and you write it's based on a challenge? will have to looke into that .Keep up the good work.Good writing about Jaken's love/hate relatioship inregards to Rin.