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Your not really going to make this a Kagome and Sesshomaru story? After all that emotional stuff with Rin ...what does she mean like nothing to him now? Unbelivable! For the love of the gods please please PLEASE do NOT turn this into Kagome/Sesshomaru story....will you please just make Rin be in the picture again....please

Kagome should have got up after the sex and killed him with another arrow. This was sick calling her Rin!!!

Ah... this chapter was beautiful! I love the way you described Rin going to him. There aren't enough people who give the lead females in stories confidence about their sexual situations without making them sound like whores. You made Rin's confidence appealing! Way to go! I am very curious now as to what is going on in Sesshomaru's present.
Waiting patiently for your next update,
botticelliangel

an interesting twist to this story would be if yod a d a chaper of Kagome to Sesshomaru, and have her reminice of her history of mistaken identities: Kikyo with Inuyasha and now Rin with Sesshomaru. Kagome holds a special place y hey heart as a character, because she is always struggling to assert her own identity over those set before her in comparison. for the sake of the canon series (because i just can't see Kagome as Rin's reincarnation when it has been established that she is Kikyo's), i see her as humoring Sesshomaru, comforting him and letting him believe what he wants. tis ais another trait that i admire about Kagome's character: her amazing love. she gives without asking back, because "it's the right thing to do," and doesn't need any other reason besides that. she is the epitome of "good," but she's still just a kid so she's also allowed to have her flaky moments. anyways, i've really enjoyed this fic. s'good. goooooood.

I was ecstatic you updated, I love this story. Your writing makes it very easy to envision the relationship and bond between Sessh and Rin. It also brings a more realsitic take on why he would be drawn to Kagome. Very well-written.

Okay now the ending with Rin was beautiful....I hope you are not about to turn this great story into a Kagome and Sesshomaru piece.......If you are thanks for the Rin part, but I'll be leaving you now....I'm a Rin and Sesshomaru fan to the end !!!!!!!!!!!! He should never be with Kagome

Beautifully written! Sess and Rin together was gentle and loving and not at all inappropriate. But hey, there's nothing wrong with a little inappropriate every once and a while, right? Thanks for sharing!

Part II was perfect ^__^

But for the love of Mike! Tell me he's not going after Kagome . . . WTF? What about InuYasha? Have you people no respect for canon?

*sigh* I'm gonna go stick my head in the sand . . .

oh...wow. if anyone is reading the reviews to see if the story is good, you MUST read this fic. the writing is eloquent and descriptive, the content is solid, and the imagery is beyond beautiful. while the underage concept might bother a few of the more stogy, traditional readers, it should not be a deterrent: rather, it is used to illustrate the deeply founded devotion of the characters. it's a mature, well written fan fic that is definitely worth reading and reviewing for yourself. wonderful.

That was a real good fic about sess and rin, i can't wait to read the rest. Pleeeeeeeeeze hurry up and write the second one.