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by HimeAndi

schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Normally, I'd hate the kiddie sex, but this was wonderful. You did a marvolous job and I must say I'm a HUGE fan of the Rin also being one of Kagome's preincarnations. *applauds* Please continue!
person lilly
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I'm almost moved to tears. You are such a wonderful writer, and so descriptive! I read 'The Last of Their Kind' and had to read more of your writing!! This story is so moving and fascinating. The theory of Rin being a reincarnation of Kikyo is truly inventive, and it actually makes sense! I never really thought about it before, but it really could be possible. [This is why I read fanfiction, to enjoy other people's fascination and analysis of some of my favorite series.] I truly enjoy this story and am eagerly waiting for the next part. Please continue to write such wonderful, creative, and breath-taking tales.
person blisblop
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very sensual and truly a fantasy worth having.You write het sex with a dexterous hand.Well done.
person jem
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
continue please!
person jem
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are an absolutely awesome writer, and this is why I asked youto continue... was this SUPPOSED to be the end? ::sob:: I hope it isn't...
person lost child
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
brilliance. Oh is this the last chapter? because this is so good. Write more for it....please?
person Megan Consoer
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Nia
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That... was awesome... it actually turned me on, hahahaha. Keep on writing!
person lizzy
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm that was soo sad and good. You're so talented! I am waiting patiently for more :)
I too, have always thought Rin and Kagome look remarkably the same...
Where do people get that Kagome and Kikyou look like mirror image? 0_x *confused*
You ARE writing more, righty?
Lord, God, I hope so. Sesshoumaru is ... so ... HOT!

Devoted reader, Lizzy.
person Lease242
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story, I kept looking for the next chapter. Very well-written, very steamy and an amazing and original story-line.