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by Charmz

person Dark Innocence
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I applaud you. That was amazing, although the whole thing was...sex. But thats why its called adultfanfiction. Anyways, I liked this story alot. I wouldn't mind a few more chapters. Oh I got a question, where'd Sango run off too? I really hope this isn't a bashing story. Cause now that Inuyasha is loose, he might try to harm the two Miko's. I really hope he doesn't do that. Well like I said it was a great story, very well written and fantastic lemons. Keep up the work. Ciao! ^.~
person CrazyDramaQween
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was um really wierd...
But I liked the beginning scences.
person Chrono
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great lemons as always!! Keep up the good work!! Definately make this more than one-shot!!
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nasty...in the good way. But, where'd Sango disappear to?
person EVILEYE
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HORNY FIC!!
person Mr. Pointy
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty damn hot. This is coming from someone who despises Inuyasha, so it's not small praise.
person ~A~
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was kinda weird but pretty funny. If you've got more ideas, I say yes, keep on going with it. See where the story takes you =P
person funny
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
make it longer plz its awesome.
person Jen
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think that you should continue this. it was a good story and i want to read more