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by Resmiranda

person Teresa
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This chapter is really one Hot, Steamy, Sweet, Sweaty, Session! (HSSSS!) I think you capture emotions very well in your story. Kagome really is falling apart, and well, If you baby-sat someone like Sexy Sesshey! What could you expect. Keep on writing Please.
person TAJE
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3, still steamy and sweaty, but more of this bittersweet emotions that Kagome had to face. She really need to be a little stronger. And Why did Sesshomaru not revive Inuyasha, I felt and I might be wrong He just didn't want to see him suffer as humans would. Now he is stuck with a lot of humans. I didn't find this too sad, just bittersweet. Thank You for this story, I really enjoyed it and looking forward to reading more from you.
person TAJE
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have just finished ch.1, I must say it was kind of slow at first, but really got my interest later on. I am intrigued at the relationship between Kagome and Sesshomaru. I was touched at how he revealed to her how Inuyasha died in the past and her reaction to this. But with Sesshomaru's mysterious nature, I can't wait to finish ch.2. I hope you continue to write. Please do!
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person trish
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story!!!!!!!! but it is so sad
person migele
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story!

damm, but there is one thing I would like to know.
what did he do, where was he?

migi-chan
person RTT
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. Simply amazing.

person God of Insanity
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the best Sesshoumaru/Kagome fic ever, I swear! I normally don't like that pairing or kagome at all, but the way you wrote it,in cin character and so detailed, made me love it. Like I said, this was very detailed and lengthy, which made it all the more better. I know this is a good story because it invoked feelings in the reader that seemed so real. None of it was cheesy or stupid, like a lot of romance stuff is, but it was lovely. I love your story a lot! I really don't know what else to say, but it was well-wri and and I couldn't find any mistakes, really, and I don't know what kind of good critiscm to give you, but I liked your story a lot. Good job!
person crystallinelily
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW....what an amazing story...the portrayal of both Kagome and Sesshoumaru is so dead on, it's scary! Oh, and it was such a sad story, too. When I finished reading, I was like, there's only six reviews? So, since it was one of the better fanfics I've read in quite a long time, I decided to drop one by. Just to say that the ending was very bittersweet. I mean, Kagome and Sesshoumaru get together, but what happens after? I know you wrote that Kagome had grown up, and she didn't care what would happen...that she was content to have that one moment with Sesshoumaru, but that's just so...sad....well, maybe sad isn't the right word. But depressing sure is.

I know for certain that you should try posting at other sites too--perhaps edit out some of the more...racy...lol! scenes and posting at fanfiction.net, or ASS--I think NC-17 fics are accepted there, though. Umm...or at Sesshoumaru: The Killing Perfection. Yes, you should most definitely post at other sites. And next time ASS has awards, I'm definitely going to nominate you! :)

I hope you keep writing!
~C Lily~
person A.J.
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is so incredibly good that I can barely find the words to adequately describe it! It's taken me two days to read all of it and I have to say that this fanfic has so much detail and substance that I found me myself having to will myself away from it. Bravo on all your hard work, you did a great job!!!

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