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by Resmiranda

person Kjinuyasha
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an excellent story. I reall enjoyed it. Sequal!!! Will he leave and come back or will he leave. You left me wanting more. What will happen next. Will he claim her. Tell her he loves her. Will she die and will he be left lonely for the rest of eternity?


I really did like it.
person karlina
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...no other words for it.
person shadowedlight
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so beautiful. im addicted ^-^
person Mys C
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate you...U made me cry...I love you...U made me cry...Ur story rocks on too many levels to explain...This was well written and soo emotional...Damn You..My nose is stuffed n my eyes r puffy...I blame you...Damn It!!! I love this...WHY!? Why do u have to make me cry...This rocks my socks...I love how she pinned him to the tree...Why does Sesshoumaru keep living, even with a youkai mate? So he lives forever...Mahn, I hate that thought that Sesshoumaru would have to go on alone without Kagome, probably empty...This is too good to end though...It ended with a bang...Keep it up...I want to read more stories from you, ur extremely talented at making people cry...With the first two chapters, i was just sad and my heart felt like it was being poked...But nothing made me cry harder than the last chapter...Damn You...My eyes hurt...I love you...Keep it up...
person Weyrd Kat
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Resmiranda,

Hi. This is the first time I review your story, and I must say, there is not much I could write here that would capture the feeling you capture in your piece. I was forwarded to your story by an Inuyasha list member, namely, Numisma. I'm not much for pairings outside of the canon, but the emotion and sometimes lack of makes Sesshoumaru seem real, as if he is waking to himself for the first time. Kagome is confident and uncertain all in the same breath and it comes out beautifully. Everything seems so natural as it happens, that I found myself cursing sleep because I wanted to finish just one more line, one more paragraph. i applaud your skill with the English language, something most people struggle with and I look forward to reading another piece, time permitting.

Ashli/Heather/Weyrd Kat
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is honestly one of the best sess/kag stories I have ever read. Actually I first read this on A Single Spark. I have a short attention span, so I usually read very long fics in sections. But, yours I read in one sitting. A relationship between the two of them is very far fetched. Many authors try to create a story around them coming together, and fail miserably. But, reading your fic, you can actually see this happening. Awesome!
person lil_penguin
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a very well-written story. It put me through the wringer, the way it pulled emotions from me. Great job with this. -Amanda
person dun-kin-nut
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that was a touching ending.
person Nicolle
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. It's real, and beautiful, and painful, and everything that a kagome/sesshomaru fic should be. I hate Sess/Kag when Kagome just decides that Sesshomaru is better and dumps Inuyasha on his ass. Because that wouldn't happen. This would happen. Kagome still loves Inuyasha with everything that she is, 10 years later, and is still living in the past. It's so realistic. And Sesshomaru is in character every moment. I loved it, and I love your writing. Thank you so much for writing this. You are truly gifted.
person Lauren
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad.......It took forever to read and I cried........This happens to be the first review I have done on this site and that is because I cried just now.... I mean...it was just so........
Anyway I think you did it brilliantly and You had me hooked at least. It was soo sad