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for In Bed with the Mob

by nena

schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was a great story.
person anonymous
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked you story; it was really good and it's one of my favorite Sesshy/Kagu stories. But I was wondering how exactly they got together (how she was tricked and stuff). I really like details and I kind of felt that the end of chapter one was abrupt, almost cut off. When I read the end of chapter one and then the beginning of chapter two, I kind of did a double take and went back to chapter one to see if I had missed something. But, it was a good story nonetheless.
person chanda
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Again, how nice. Man her dad was a bastard... great sequal... loved how you tied it together in a way

Chanda
person neie
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good. Just as well-written as the Inu/Kag one, but the only reason why I enjoyed this one less is because my love of Sess/Rin far, far surpasses my love for Sess/Kagura. But I read it through. Very sweet, very cute, and still WOW factor for the lemons. Great job! ^^
person Deep Serenity
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know I read this don't know why I didn't review. Anyway it's great!
person StarKissed
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for writing In Bed With the Mob and Sleeping With the Mob. A sweet, well-writen, romantic and sexy Inu/Kag lemon is a wonderful and enough to make my day, but the same for Sessh/Kagura and with Rin well portrayed too is truly a jewel. So thank you and please continue to write.
person Ama-Chan
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooh! I love your story! Thank soo much for writing Sesshy/Kagu!! I loved both this and Sleeping with the Mob. CAn you do a final set with Sango and Miroku? Any way great job and keep writing!!!
person ioke
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome story!! i cant wait to read another story of yours! you an awesome author making me one of your fans!! keep up the great work!!
person Mandy
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good luck with your GRE's! You'll do a wonderful job!!! Almost too bad your dear reviewers and you can't have a "thank God the GRE's are OVER" party!! :) Good chapter! I love your stories and check them all the time for updates. YOU ROCK! And thanks for responding to my questions in "Beautiful Miscommunications"!!
person DarkMystic
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like the last chapter, it brought a few tears to my eyes. ::Sniffles.::