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for Pictures on the Wall

by Kena

person aaaaa
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
see now this is a nice story although im about to flame kouga because i hate him with the passion he got what he deserved he is a weak worthless wolf demon who cant fight lol anyway he shouldnt be so cocky to fight inyuasha who could kick his ass without shards of the jewl so he is WAY more then a match for him now ud have to be a dumbass to think diffrent anyway i guess i like this ending i meanhe got a girl in the end so its ok
person SorrowfulAyame
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wooot! GREAT story. I waited patiently for each and every new chapter. PLEASE update again. I can't wait to see what happens "the morning after" lol
person drake220
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice. very nicely done. however, i do have to point out that kenji was very hurt and that kouga HIT her. i'm not so sure if i'm okay with the fact that ayame basically lets emotions get in the way of dealing with that fully. but it was still great
person Jen
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Even through Ayame isn't in the manga i think that she is great character and in a way she is perfect for Koga. They just fit for some reason. Like how Sango and miroku fit. It's fate. So bring my second favorite character next to Sessh-Maru which is Koga. I love to read any Aya/Koga pairings and sadly there isn't many. your story is great and i can't wait for more.
person gittelbug
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
leave off right when it gets to the good part evil!
person Zelix (Not logged on)
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello, remember me? I reviewed this story at Mediaminer but i didn't think it was here as well... nice to know, since i'm also an author here, good to see you!

As for the review: Brilliant chapter, simply brilliant... emotions, grammar, the situation... man, this rocks! You're REALLY good and this fic is most definetily one of my favourite ones now!
person AnjelRocker
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... I love this story... Chapter 3 was great... ^_^;
person AnjelRocker
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh me, oh my... you must update this soon. Please, Please, Please. :)
person Anjel Rocker
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it... You must update soon. :D
person nutmeg
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great so far, please update soon ^_^