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November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...ano...i think you get the picture. THIS IS AN AWSOME STORY. YOUHAVE TO UPDATE SOON. AND HOPEFULY I'M THE FIRST TO REVIEW THE NEW CHAPPIE.
YAAAAAAY
mmmm citrus
lol
ja ne
K
YAAAAAAY
mmmm citrus
lol
ja ne
K
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November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great lime and great new plot but i liked the old plot too so yeah. i dont no. i cant deside wich one i like better. but its good. so plz update soon
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November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was another amazing chappie i cant belive your such a good writer! Plzzz Update soon!!!!!!!!!
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November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I love it. I know how embarassed Kagome must be because of the ssex sex conversation wiier mer mom, except my mom drew pictures to go along with that conversation. (Ah, I'm having brain spasms and it took me five minutes to remember how to spell Kagome's name) The lime was excelent and I can't wait for more of those! (citrus, mmmm) Anyway, great story and I can't wait for the next update!!!
~iola
~iola
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October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great. this another one great in the making I assure you. I'm new at this review thing so I'm sorry if it sounds crappy. Keep writing.
your friend Loner
your friend Loner
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October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice chap. i really felt kagome's embarrassment at her mom's talk about safe sex.
as for where the story goes, birth control pills need to be taken for one month before you can use them safely, so if/when the sexual encounter comes up, it would be a goos idea not to use them. hmm... maybe inuyahsa can get her a present? like chocolates or bubble bath or something revealing...
as for where the story goes, birth control pills need to be taken for one month before you can use them safely, so if/when the sexual encounter comes up, it would be a goos idea not to use them. hmm... maybe inuyahsa can get her a present? like chocolates or bubble bath or something revealing...
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey this is good. i like it. please update soon. thanx.
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey awesome story and you should know now i only review the stories i it it has a great start and awesome plot. i think you should make inuyasha seem more of a bad boy at the moment he seems like a wannabe bad boy to me just keep writing and update soon please and again way to go
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice job for a first fic! Just keep an eye on your spelling - otherwise EXCELLENT!
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey nice story i really like the way your makin things. Cursed school! i cant waittill you update the next chappie!!!!!