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amazing, absolutly amazing, totally original I am so loving your story.

oooo...ooooo....ooooo!!!! love the story!! please update and ill reveiw k?

My, this is a good story! I've been thinking about starting a high school fic of my own soon too... though i must think out a few details first. Anyway, good chapters and characters, the plot isn't 100% original but it's still good, way above average at least. Your grammar is good but there were a few errors, like "Youkia", it's actually "Youkai". Besides that, not many other errors. The emns ans are good too but i did wonder though about why her father did all that? If it's meant to be explained later i understand.

Anyawy, good luck with school and i hope you'll update this a soon as you can!

- Zelix, read my fics people!

OMG! AWESOME SHEER GENIOUS!!!! I WANT MORE PLZZ UPDATE SOON!! O and i can relate to the fact that school has u worked up cuz im da same way/ CURSE DESE FUCKING SCHOOLS!!!!!!!!!!

great but im confused is naroku her father or her old lover or what. what does he have to with anything right now. pls explain in the next chapter. thank. update soon pls.

take as much time as you.. da longer you take to write da next chapter da better it will be but den agian im dying to know more here...im so impatience but i understand what your coming from just dont over exert yourself ok..keep it up and youll do fine...

such a great story...omg u you have such a great talen for writing..keep up da good work..wow...

Soooo good but make it longer

::giggles:: i think it's really good four our first fanfiction. lol
my first fanficiton was TERRRIBLE of coars i'm not gonna publish it
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that was great and you did a wonderful job with the lime. please update soon.