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by Annetta

person jen
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Godddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love your story *trying to catch my breath* There nothing like a little torture before the big goal. I love the bad guy meeting the good girl (but she wants the bad boy) this is great. Write more soon!!!!!!!!!!! And if you want a suggestion on writing. Well Inuyasha kissed and ran. So make kagome get some revenge then leave. (just a suggestion) It's mean but it's expected and then it could turn out to be a great ride.