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for Ryo High

by Annetta

person kc
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey im loving it you should make them take gym class together and Kag can get back at inu by hiting him in the head with a basket ball. he could later corner her in shower for some lemony fun
person hi-kick kagome
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!
THAT WAS THE BEST STORY EVER BUT MAYBE OUR COUPLE COULD GET HOT AND HEAVY!!!!!!?????? BUT I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



HOTAND HEAVY HOTANDHEAVY HOT AND HEAVY HOT AND HEAVY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????????????????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person katt_jam
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhh please I need more I'm begging you. you'rllinlling me you know that? lol love the story bring on the chapters.
person nutmeg
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great! update soon please!
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice story, but no one, and I mean no one says Gang Banger anymore. It either "I'm in a gang," "Gangster," or "Banger." Maybe it is me, because I'm black and live in the hoods of Chi-town (AKA Chicago). Don't think I am trying to flame you. I'm just giving advice, to make it more readable to other ethnic groups. If I were to let one of my friends, who are not into anime read this, she would be very upset at me. So try not to put alo of slang in stories that all will read.

person Jake
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey thats not fair. comeon u have to update like really dfast. i have to no what happens now. pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaassssssseeeeeeee
person Nico
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this fic. Please update soon. I must know what happens between Inu and Kaggy! Keep up the good work.

Blessed Be
person Jake
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey great i love these kinds of fics. keep wrighting. and update soon please.
person catt
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WRITE MORE!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!
person vashta
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting for someone to finish one of these bad boy- good girl stories. You are off to a good start, don't rush it though, let them suffer for a little while, ha ha!