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Wow, I want more please, update as soon as possiable, this story has grabed my attention so much now!

I have to agree with RaptorChicky on that one. Pleeeeease have kagome discover inuyasha's identities by something other than a kiss. Too batman forever AND spiderman. I love your story and update soon!

ps i added u to my reccommended reading list!

-squeals like a stupid school girl at the site of an update-
God damn alarm clock!! I'm honestly surprised Kagome didn't kill that blasted device (god knows, I've destroyed a few of mine...).
Hmmmm...and what exactly are those 2 trouble makers (Inuyasha and Miroku) going to up to later in the evening?? Oh, and I like it that you have Miroku 'on the inside'--rather helpful for The Hanyou, ne? And one more thing before I forget--PLEASE don't let Kagome find out that Inuyasha and her silver-haired obsession are one and the same through a kiss! I found it rather lame when Schumacher pulled that junk in "Batman Forever"--I KNOW you're more creative than him!
-insert cliched demand for more here-

Hehhehe... good one, 'If he kisses all the damsels he saves, i'll castrate him' that's a good one... the plot keeps thickening huh? I'm impressed and it will be extremely interesting how the character relationships will go, keep it up and update soon.

Oh yes, i read that review you gave me, thanks for that one, i also have two other fics you might just find interesting:

1. Loneliness of the Free Wind, which is a one-shot but VERY long one at that, in this fic we will follow the life of Kagura after Naraku is dead, will she really be free or will she never escape his influence? We will also meet my OC who is a total masterpiece, he really is.
2. Time Soul Exodus, the sequel to Loneliness of the Free Wind, takes place 1 year after the previous storys events... let's just say that fate is never a simple thing, especially when the well, Youkai and magic are involved, an excellent fic with a intense, deep plot.

Hope you read and review those as well, if you're interested that is.

- Zelix, see ya again!

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO PLEASE WRITE MORE ME LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^

darlin' that was a fabulous kiss! loved every minute of it! i see a total superman/lois lane/ clark kent triangle thing happening here and so i'm going to warn you- PLEASE let Kagome figure it out!! it was always one of my biggest complaints with the Superman franchise that he works with reporters-people who find this sort of stuff out for a living- but because he wears glasses, noone recongnizes him! It was so_friggin'_stupid!! kagome's a detective- give her some clues so that she-unlike lois lane- will not be some idiot woman pining away for someone who is RIGHT THERE. and Kaogme and inu should kiss again, this time as inu. i mean, kissing a hero is cool but nothing beats frenching with the sexiest of them all, inu as himself. yummy yummy. oh adn i ADORED that description of inu-chan in his boxers...makes a girl want to go to a bar, drink to much adn use her imagination.....that sounded weird but i'm too hyped up to change it. update soon!!

You have a new fan! I absolutely love this story. I must admitt though, I was a little tentative to read it just by looking at the summary, but i figured everyone's suck and I might as well give it a try - boy am I glad that I did! I really enjoy the comic book aspect of your story its very interesting to see how you incorporate all that into the world of Inuyasha. Keep up the good work!

Yes, Yes That was a good kiss. I wanted to know and i wasn't disappointed. I love it!!!! And i can't wait to read more. More More More

Let me guess.....Bad tempered captain=Sango ( so is there gonna be some Sango/Miruko? My, I'd love to see how hard he gehit hit since the lady plays such a strong position.)
...partner=Our lovely Kagome. Is there gonna be a love triangle ofInu/Kag/Kou? * Rubs hands together and grinning evilly* I simply adore those kinds of fight scenes.
But your the author, you do what you think best, I trust you.
Is there gonna be Shippou? Not a demand, just asking.
Oh, and that kiss was posatively BRILLIANT!!! Absolutely melting how Inuyasha asked for a 'fee' from our leading lady!!
Please Please put up more chapters soon!!!!!!!!

I've officially fallen in love with this story... i really have, the plot, characters, humour and everything in between is simply superb... hey, this is just a suggestion but do you want to compare plots? I have two stories out of so many of my others that have a VERY complex plot in it, if you're EVER interested, here's what they're names are:

1. Silver Winds of Passion
2. Dark Soul of the Future, White Heart of the Past (Don't let the name fool you, it's good.)

Well, see ya and thanks again for this wonderful fic and i hope you'll update soon!

- Zelix