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for The Hanyou

by VeRoN

person Fireminx
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story!!! Poor Kagome. When it rains, it pours ne?
person sakepolitan
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh! ooh!! lemme guess!!! ummmmmm....ummmmmmmm....INUYAHSA!??? huh? huh??? Well it damn well better be him. I hope. Anyways. THANKS FOR UPDATING! Can't wait to see what you come up with next! And uhhh, maybe sooner this time hmm? Good work!
person $3$$}{0/\\/\\@|2U
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hate cliffys... but hey atleast there is an updare * smiles *
person RaptorChicky
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEEE!!! -stares at monitor in disbelief, tips off chair, climbs back into chair, and procedes to bounce in said like 3 year old- EEEEEEEE!
(I'm happy. Can't you tell?)
This really made my day, truely. After a rotten night at work, what's the first story I see that's been updated? This one. Thank so much! Again, another nice installment to your story--I like how you have Kagome and Kouga treating each other (the fawning Kouga in the series tends to grate on my nerves). I guess he doesn't realize how dumb it is to tick off Kagome when she has a GUN. Hmmmm...checking out the hot professor during lecture....hmmmm...I've never done that...honest! lol And who is raiding the fridge? Well, I've got 3 suspects: Souta, Shippo, and lover boy, ready to woo his woman with dinner! (while wearing nothing but an apron--hey, I'm entitled to fantasize...and I REALLY need to quit typing up reviews after working 10 hrs a night...)
person littleolmee
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
welcome back, so sorry about your loss. i'll keep ya in my prayers. wonderful chapter, i had almost forgotten about your story when i got on here and found
it this morning, thank you for the wonderful surprise. great chapter, man, kouga is an idiot is he not? loved the play between kouga, miroku, kagome, then inuyasha later. sango makes a good chief! like how you kept kouga and inuyasha's regular insults in there. hmm, so who in the kitchen with kagome?
so i take it miroku and inuyasha are off for a night of making the police look bad? well i hope your writers block is gone and you will feel like writing some more.
i must say this is the only story i've seen using this idea, i think you have a great story going. can't wait to see where you take us with your story!
littlolmee
person ravenshadow
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! another chapter I'm so happy! I had almost given up hope. But you have redeemed my faith. I can't wait to see who is in her apartment! So please. please. please update soon! I'm am so loving this story!
person jess
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn this is sooo good! u are teh best! im happy you can start writing again...actually more like reallly REALLY hyper! ur just too good at writing! i love this story and your other one! they are so well planned! i cant wait to see what happens with inu/the hanyou and kagome!! plz update real quick! i think i ll die of suspense! well i hope you can! bye! lov ya lots!
person starr
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
updated YES! excellent chapter! i waited like forever! plz update soon!
person Catt
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiya!!! I AM SO HAPPY UR BACK!!! I totally miss ya! How u doing??? Ohhh me glad u updated this story rocks! Keep up with the great work!!!

Catt~~~~
person Hello Betty
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Smiles innocently* What makes you think I would quarter you? * fingers the sabre absentmindedly*
You did it again, extremely pleased with this chapters events, especially Inu and Koga's fight. God, do I love the rivalry over Kagome between them!!!!
Then there's Inu's possecsiveness over " his Kagome" , God must've blessed her personally me thinks.
Also the nitwit of a wolf, he sure is stupid and clueless as hell, but it was funny seeing Kag's seeth over his manner whilst he was simply oblivious to the whole thing. Not exactly the man of your dreams huh?
And finally, the fridge raider could be: Hojo her ex-boyfriend who followed her all the way from Kyoto, or Kouga who is somehow convinced that he has somehow stepped into the position of 'her husband', or even Souta who came secretly to visit her.
For some reason I can't imagine it to be Inuyasha cos he only just got back in her good graces and as a University prof, he wouldn't go raiding in his neirgouh's fridge no matter how desperate. It has to be some one who Kag's knows quite well. * sits and ponders all week*
Please update soon!!! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!