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for The Death Of Tears

by MemoriesVoid

person SGOTJ-sesshomaru's Goddess of the Jewel
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*soab*oh what a wounderful one shot...the only thing i didn't like about it was the fact that it was..well..a one shot...i wish it was'nt but i dont see how it could be made into a longer story.sesshomaru's mother was just as i imagined her to be.in my own inutaisho/orig character she very very much like you discribed her in 'death of tears' cold,nearly emotionless,strong,and like all the characters in rumiko's masterpiece...full of pride.i also injoyed how iziyou was brought into the story,so much like little rin to sesshomaru.a bit of irony there,sesshomaru's mother was obviously puzzled about little iziyou who had a child-like kindness to her,as does rin!i especially like the part where iziyou explained who even though she could'nt possibly help everyone in the world she wished to help anyone she came across.this story as i will say again was outright breath taking...the ending made me a little teary...how anguished coming to the relization that she loved him as she was dieing...she didnt even get to tell inutaisho that she loved him.sesshomaru's character was done very well also.but who was the demon she was battling,and how did she and inutaisho meat iziyou?all and all-a top rating to this one shot,a must read in my book...the title brought into the story beautifully,the death of tears brought tears to my eyes...
person Jackie
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good but depressing I nearly cried http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1569465/1/ i recommend this story its a real tear jerker about seshoumaru and his family
person Caitriona
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent piece of fiction. Your characterization was wonderful and gave quite a bit of insight into Sess's possible past. Good Job.

Caitriona
person TAJE
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Kind of Sad. But good writing. What makes me so sad, is that ... maybe because I'm a mother, Could never be emotionless to my child, I think girlfriend father was a big issue in her cold life. I like this story. Looking foward to more.
person nutmeg
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww...its so sad :( But a great story anyways ^_^ Well written and you made it so realistic you had tears in my eyes!
person Kittyonnails
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Applause! I really enjoy one-shot's like this. You did a great job!
person ...
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
amazing