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by Sakurablossom22

person mel
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome!!! i raelly like this fic. hope you continue it. i wanna know what inuyasha ment by -i'm going to hold you till im forced to let go- line? is that his way of saying till kikyo take's him to hell or till kagome sits him? anyway love the fic please update again soon.
person heather
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
here is an idea. inu and kag tell each other there feelings. they mate, they have a baby 9 months down the line then kikyo steals the baby saying it should have been hers! or she could capture inuyasha instead and seal him away some place the othere's cant find him and she trys to brain wash him into loving her again while kag and the gang go crazy looking for him. i have more ideas but they are all crazy much like these two. anyway please continue this fic.
person kit master
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no, no kouga/kagura. she sucks ass. so (hint, hint) where is kikio during all of these events? =) u said u needed ideas.
person Anon
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it needs some work but i want to know how the story end.
person amber
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please end this story bc im confused about the hole thing
person amber
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please end this story bc im confused about the hole thing
person Anon
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it please update as soon as you can don't give up on this story.
person Kisara-san2812
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don´t be sad if you don´t get much reviews! There are many out there who like your story! Please post another chapter! Your story is lovely, so don´t let it end here =)
Greetz Kisara
person lemonluvr
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i wonder if it's possible to give you 6 reviews from myself? oh well, JUST DON'T STOP THE STORY!!! I LIKE IT TOO MUCH!!!
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lucky you then! b/c I've decided to update sooner! The next chapter should be out in a couple days, I've been inspired lately!