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November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually like Kagome being paired with Inuyasha or Sesshoumaru in fanfics, but I found myself able to tolerate it in your fic. You did a nice job on the lemon scenes. I do have one major complaint though and that is you cannot kill Sesshoumaru! Please don't kill Sesshoumaru, please!!!! I'm sure the three of them could get along just fine, so there's no need to kill Sesshoumaru!!!!!
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October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think Part 4 should be called 'Submissive', but not Submission. The second one is a slightly different meaning...and can be used some other time.
Just a suggestion...
Just a suggestion...
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yii! it just keeps getting better and better! <3 I simply love it, you know! Whaiii! Sesshi was so cute on the bottom, (tho he was stil on top) I must draw more inu on top pictures X3 And poor sess!!! I feel sorry for him bein' all weak and sleepy. so cute tho <3 more! more!
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent. Inuyasha gave the arm and got slashed for it and Sess saves him. How surprising. They must love each other now. Hope so.
Was that what Inuyasha was trying to tell him? Mmm. The n wan was great. I love your writing style and am glad that you updated so soon. I
hope Sess is alright. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Was that what Inuyasha was trying to tell him? Mmm. The n wan was great. I love your writing style and am glad that you updated so soon. I
hope Sess is alright. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say that this piece of work is one of the best I have seen. I really like the plot and hope that you continue to update as soon as possible. I would also like to express my happiness at how well you write your story and the way it flows.
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a nice thing Inuyasha did for Sesshoumaru getting his arm back for him. update soon
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What's the explaination behind Sesshoumaru passing out like that? update soon
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why did Sesshoumaru's sword transform like that? Can't wait to read the next chapters. update soon
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
Damn.
Uh, how to phrase my review? This was an unexpected find, as I was not expecting to find a good Inyu/Sess yaoi, and...damn... Uh, I think this will be hard to top.
Damn.
Hope you write some more...
Damn, this was good...
MIKAA
Damn.
Uh, how to phrase my review? This was an unexpected find, as I was not expecting to find a good Inyu/Sess yaoi, and...damn... Uh, I think this will be hard to top.
Damn.
Hope you write some more...
Damn, this was good...
MIKAA
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. that was like... so awsome... *_______________* So damn fucking hott and awsome. Wow I need a clod shower *shudders* Update soon, this fic is like, the best fic in the world. I love the fact how Inuyasha gave Sess' arm back, that was such a sweet moment turned bad when Inu was all bloody and dieing XD I just loved that so much, I have a fasination with blood ^.^;;;;;;; Don't kill the little vampire, lmao. Please update soon, I want to see what happens next!
TTFN! Ta Ta For Now!
TTFN! Ta Ta For Now!