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for Beautiful Miscommunications

by nena

person snowfall
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read chapter one. Totally friggin' awesome. I am still grinning after laughing my ass off about the
picture of Inuyasha running out of the hospital half naked. LOL. I know I'm going to enjoy this story.

person akdreamer
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I have no questions as of yet, but would like to say this is an Awesome story and you write it very very well.... I will keep my eyes open for the next chapter.......Sueric is right your good!!!!
person Ikiwi
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet again another amazing chapter. So many unanswered questions and possiblitlies... it has my mind running wild. I loved it, of course. Update as soon as possible!
-Ikiwi
person Akdreamer
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is totally AWESOME!!!! Please update soon!!! You've got alot of talent and the story is as good as one of Suerics'....Keep it up I see now why Sueric recommends you.....
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, hooray, another chapter! I've been waiting so patiently and it was worth it! Please update again soon!

Kimberlee
person Tarzan
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
who shot her who shot her? haha please please please update soon!
person Wrathchylde
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. You have a good sense of mystery so it doesn't allow the overall plot to fade into the background as some do. Keep it up.
person Gyousei
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, I really like your story, you've got some great ideas, just love the whole almost nakie Inu in the elevator, that is classic, and your lime thingie with Sesshomaru and Kagura in the dark elevator was hotter than most Lemons I've read, hey there's quite a few things involving elevators in this story.....

you've got a good talent for writing but not so much in your keyboard skills, but your story more than makes up for the few errors ^_^.

Update Soon!!!!
person Ikiwi
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I must first say that this story is excellent, but is it normal for me to not know what the hell is going on? Like.. JEEZ.. my brain hurts from trying to figure out what's happening. Am I supposed to know who is who and where is where and what is what? I just can't comprehend it all; it's intensely confusing. I would appreciate it if you made everything just a TINY bit more clearer, without giving away anything that is meant to be with held at this point in the plot. I really do like it though, from what I understand. Hmm.. is it just me? Does everyone else not understand it all, or am I just really stupid? Well, please update soon with another chapter! Thanks!
person roguedork
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story keeps getting better and better