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aww, a tiff between inuyasha and kagome. not what i was expecting for them. but oh well, the plot thickens!!

524662 stands for KAGOME when you use a telephone keypad!!! do i get a prize?! say, maybe an update?!

I forgot to mention how much i liked the chapter, and i realized i typed the code wrong! but then again, in the last three lines of the chapter, so did you! but we all know that its 524663. :) I hope I didn't inadvertently reveal something or your next chapter. if I did, I'm really sorry!!

Absolutely wonderful. The plot is coming together nicely, the characters pairing up with nice timing. The insertions with the numbers adds anticipation. Well done! Oh, how do you come up with Miroku's lines. They are absolutely wonderful. And, the comment Sess made thanking Naraku for not letting Kagura wear pants made me laugh my ass off! It just keeps getting better. The dream and kiss between Kag and Inu was so sweet. I like the fact that I cannot figure out what the deal is with the old Miko and twins. It's not easy to write a story that doesn't give itself away. Great job. A truly excellent chapter.

Snowfall

524662 524662 524662...you know I never really noticed until this chapter that, that number was repeated inbetween prospective changes...now I'm dieing to know what the hell 524662 means...I don't think I've ever read anything like this...compleatly unique I'll be standing in line until the next chapter...*preys muse dosn't leave you*

Yeah! More! I've never been a fan of AU until I started reading yours. Now I'm searching for the good ones. It's not easy! I've got one in mind to write after I finish my current story. Can't wait to see what's next! I'm so glad Kagura didn't die! I know I'm not the first to review, but I'm asking a question anyway. ;) Are the twins linked in the anime? I mean, are they two unrelated characters or two characters we are used to seeing together?

Kimberlee

Wow! another great chapter! and you updated so fast! thanks so much! have i mentioned before that i absolutely love this story? i just thought i would make that completely clear, in case u didn't pick up on it before. well, thanks for the chapter! keep it up and update soon!
-ikiwi

I couldn't help myself. I read the story straight through. Compliment one. Two, I like your writing style. I laughed in several places. The dog making a pig out of himself. LOL. You are so witty. Three, you have angst without it being too sad. Four, the nightmare scenes are sprung on us suddenly and a great addition giving the story great body. Five, your style is fun. Six, action, action, action...ah... Seven, oh the intrigue! Eight, the characters are so in character. Excellent job. Nine, awesome plot. Oh, yeah. Your characters have a lot of depth. That was ten. Eleven, I love how you chop it up weaving a treacherous trail for us to follow. Twelve, very colorful and descriptive writing. Thirteen, original pairings. If I told you every detail that I enjoyed, I would have to repeat nearly the entire story commenting on everything.

I'm sure I will think of more later. I love every bit of it. You do need some editing done, but it is worth overlooking to read such a great story. I will ask no questions as I love surprises. I hate knowing what is going to happen next. Keep your mysteries. I hope you update regularly. I anxiously await your next chapter.

I just wanted to let you know that a part of chapter ten is missing. But other then that, I love it!

lets prey that writers block is on an extended vacation...this was a great chapter...its nice that Kagura lives at least in the storys *takes a moment for the dearly departed* I really love the Sesshomaru Kagura pairing