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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been busy and got behind. Oh, goody. Inu marked Kag's. WooHoo! Go Sess! You have made him such a sexy stud.
Finally, we find out what the numbers mean, but still don't know where it is. So, is the jewel really coming to the surface?
You are keeping this so close to the original cannon. It's great. Kagura and Rin are so sweet together. OMG! Inu in the
rubble! I wonder if the old Miko is Midoriko. Miroku in shorts is very funny and his connections and cryptic conversations
make him mysterious. You are doing an excellent job. I don't read your notes so that I'm kept completely in the dark.
This is a very exciting story. I love the action. That's my kind of story-action, drama, romance, mystery. You have it all.
Keep up the good work. I can't wait for your next chapter.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
Finally, we find out what the numbers mean, but still don't know where it is. So, is the jewel really coming to the surface?
You are keeping this so close to the original cannon. It's great. Kagura and Rin are so sweet together. OMG! Inu in the
rubble! I wonder if the old Miko is Midoriko. Miroku in shorts is very funny and his connections and cryptic conversations
make him mysterious. You are doing an excellent job. I don't read your notes so that I'm kept completely in the dark.
This is a very exciting story. I love the action. That's my kind of story-action, drama, romance, mystery. You have it all.
Keep up the good work. I can't wait for your next chapter.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT is Kagome doing in chapter 6???? why was she pacing the hallway nervously???? I think maybe part of the story is missing there... might need to check and the beginning of chapter 7 seems like it started in the middle of the paragragh.... Great story LOVE it- keep up the goood work!!!
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Wow....
left me speechless
left me speechless
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I so love this story. Has me completely enthralled everytime. I cain't wait to find out how everything ties together. Jakotsu was just too funny...and I loved the license plate! Purple hot pants....oh dear. If only I could find a pair....
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What have we here? Just what kind of life has Miroku led? I have never seen the episodes
with Jakotsu, but you did him up nice and what a wonderfully unexpected come back from
Sango! The mural is such a cool idea. Where did you come up with it? An old Hitchcock movie?
Oh, Rin is so cute. I like how you have Kagura enjoying Rin and Sess 'enjoying'
Kagura's presence. I think I would be just as indignant as Kagura if I found out that some-
one was inspecting my body while I was out of it. Oh, the dark promise in his remark! But, he's
no fool. If she's up to something, he knows. Sometimes, I think someone should just shake
the daylights out of Kag and Inu. They have more personal hangups than...let me think.
You've made Shippou such a cutie too.
I always look forward to the next chapter.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
with Jakotsu, but you did him up nice and what a wonderfully unexpected come back from
Sango! The mural is such a cool idea. Where did you come up with it? An old Hitchcock movie?
Oh, Rin is so cute. I like how you have Kagura enjoying Rin and Sess 'enjoying'
Kagura's presence. I think I would be just as indignant as Kagura if I found out that some-
one was inspecting my body while I was out of it. Oh, the dark promise in his remark! But, he's
no fool. If she's up to something, he knows. Sometimes, I think someone should just shake
the daylights out of Kag and Inu. They have more personal hangups than...let me think.
You've made Shippou such a cutie too.
I always look forward to the next chapter.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is there anyway we can convince you to bring the next chapter out just a little bit early? Pretty Please?! Anywho, nice chapter. Can't wait to read more.
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another chapter. Woo-hoo! I have so many more questions I want to ask about the twins... it's driving me crazy! As for the driving downtown thing, I just figured it meant that Miroku picked up customers in the downtown area who are mostly tourists who would ask about 'those kind of places.' Is there something else, or do I get a cookie? Till next time!
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been following this for quite some time. this is the first time i have reviewed. sorry for that.
But, I just have to say... I LOVE THIS CHAPPIE. I have really enjoyed the story. but, the moving mural
and the dream scene for yasha were great, the realization that the mural moved in reality was fabulous.
Knowing who Kagura's contact is, is even better! Really Great Chappie!
Wlfhund
But, I just have to say... I LOVE THIS CHAPPIE. I have really enjoyed the story. but, the moving mural
and the dream scene for yasha were great, the realization that the mural moved in reality was fabulous.
Knowing who Kagura's contact is, is even better! Really Great Chappie!
Wlfhund
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo-hoo! Happily waiting for citrus! I'm very excited about the interweavings of the manga plot within your story. Hope to read more soon!
Kimberlee
Kimberlee
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have already given you a technical review. It's all childishness from here on our. Poor Inu and Kags. Wow, the mural. Who would've thought. You're good. WooHoo. Sess and Kagura. What's the witch up to? Hope she isn't setting up Sess unless it's to kill Naraku. Still love the numbers. Finally, the wind tunnel. I wasn't sure if you were going to use that. Aaawww. Miroku is so worried about his sister. I hope Akago bites the dust. Rin is so cute. I hope she has a bigger part to play. What is old six arms up to? Or was it eight? Wonderful chappie. Keep the numbers coming.
Snowfall
Snowfall