rate_review Reviews

Another beautiful chapter

i love your story. and i understand boyfriends can be a pain. I just broke up with mine last month.

Sorry I haven't reviewed in so long! If you can't recognize me, you may know me better as Kombat_King on FF.net. One, this is sheer brilliance at its' best, and two, DO NOT KILL KAGOME (for good that is). Also, check over the chapter again, there are several gramatical errors in it. Keep up the good work!
Sincerely,
Will

awesome story so far i can't wait to know what happends next, that damn naraku! i love the way u are going on w/ kagome and inuyasha relationship. i hope u update again soon!

Oh wow. I haven't been reading any fanfics lately, so I decided to catch up on them all today. I just read your last 3 chapters, and they were all amazing. I really love how the story is all coming together and is slowly coming to an end. I'm full of so much suspence, waiting for the climax that is soon to come. It all just keeps building up, it's crazy. You are amazing at writing - such a gift. So much is happening and going on, the plot is so deep. I love it all. Looking forward to your next update,

~Ikiwi

Ah, another great chapter. There were a few typos and such, but a great story nonetheless. I'm a junkie for angst. Wish you could have drug out Inu's fight for life a little longer. Of course, that's just me. I think you're being too nice to us. I'm such an evil author. I love to keep my readers hanging! Hehehe. I love that Inu marked Kag without even asking. Such a bold move since it violates some of society's mores (pronounced morays). The deaths in the explosion were sad, but that's what happens in real life. They will get that SOB eventually, ne? Wonder what role Sesshoumaru will be playing in the rubble. Well, keep writing. I will continue to read and review.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

very goo update. i luved it
keep it up and update soon.
you rock as a writer. i read "the ad" as well, and loved it. and was pleasantly suprised when i had finished reading it, to find out you wrote that as well. GREAT JOB! keep it up, and forget the pain. i'm in the same situation. i broke my hand, and the cast just came off... so we have to grin and bare it. haha.way to go

~Anime fan~
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Wow, I was confused at first. I thought I'd missed something! Nicely written scene with good characterizations. I really really really hope that Kagome's death won't be a permanent thing!?!

Waa-hoo! Hooray for lemon! Your characterization of Sesshoumaru is very sexy... I love it! I'm enjoying all the intrigue and I can't wait until the conclusion... but then it will be over! Oh-no!

no....it's a cliffhanger...*sigh* are u gonna kill off inu yasha???? NO U CAN'T!!!!! ahhh!!!!*screams runnin around crazy like and my cat gives me a weird look*