rate_review Reviews

Is it gettin' hot in here or is it just me.......Mmm...Mmm....good is all I have to say to this. Keep up the good work. Its great. I love it. I want some more of it......Please. thanks.

Congratulations fellow nominee! You definitely deserve it! It's good to have you back... I was missing your work. I wouldn't mind having notice of your postings. I alway check AFF to see updates for this story, but I'd love to know about other works as well. I am eager for your next update, and I'm glad your life is easing up on you. Good luck with your ex - stay firm! BTW, you've made Sesshoumaru even hotter than I thought was even possible. Good on ya!

Sorry it has taken so long to review and hope your personal life is looking up. There are so many small things that make
this story good. For instance, the fact that Inu decorated his apartment like Kag’s suggested.

Keeping the location of the Shikon no Tama secret all this time gives readers something to look forward to as the pairs come
together. Also, I still can’t figure out the identity of the twins. Of course, I haven’t seen all the episodes either. And the numbers
keep ticking away. It’s good that there are so many different characters coming from different angles. It keeps the fic from becoming
stale as it winds to an end.

Oh my, Sessy-sama! Wish I were Kagura. On her knees! Go Kagura, make him scream! If only we knew who has her heart now. Sess
is going to be major pissed when he finds out the Inu and Sango failed to retrieve her heart. A nice plot within a plot. I can’t wait to see
how it ties the twins into the story. I hope they aren’t working for a bad guy.

The death of the little girl is so sad. Inu had to know a lot of the neighborhood kids. Such angst with the nightmare. I’ll be glad when
Akago gets his. Humph! Little bastard.

Nice lemons, but I would add more description-tasting, touching, seeing, and feeling verbs.

Loved the new chapters. Keep up the good work. I’m going to need to re-read it since you did a re-write. Love the story.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

I wish you could update soon. It saddens me to think that you have come to a crossroads in your life. All will be better in the end and you will be happy. Get well soon and help us readers see the end of this great story.

This is such a wonderful and thought out story that it needs to be finished. When everything else around you looks like it is out to get you, you always have your writing. Please do not give up on it. This story is a truly amazing work of fiction with the discriptons and emotions running through it, that I find myself waiting with baited breath until the next instalment.

Just to let you know, love you work and still here waiting patiently for an update!

Snowfall

I love this story and wondered why this story doesnt have thousands of reviews, because its a great story. pls updae soon.....ty

Ohh yay! Thank you so much for the update! I loved that chapter. It was so full of drama. You write so well. I always find myself checking for an update on your story, and when I actually find one, I'm overwhelmed by excitement. Hehe. Well, thank you again for the new chapter, and please update ASAP, but I know you're busy, so don't rush it!

I just discovered your story and i read it straight through. It's absolutely awesome!! You have such a rare gift for writing, never give it up. I understand your position, sometimes it really does seem like the universe is conspiring against us. What can I say? All i can do is wish you luck and hope that, like myself and many others, writing serves as a distraction and an outlet for you. Keep up the good work

-Rosy

i'm just happy to see you have update, everything will be ok in the end all u gotta do is give it time. i do hope everything works out. take all the time u need.