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WooHoo! *snoopy dance* You updated! Yay! Oh my, Sess and Kagura. What a perfect place for a lemon. Snot, you left it out. I'm so happy that Kagura has her heart back. Now if we can keep Naraku from killing her some other way. Man, those two are missing out on all the outside action. Course, there's plenty going on inside, ne? I just loved how you involved the mural. It is so creepy. *shivers* Inuyasha was such an idiot. Let's hope he makes up for it. Hihi. Sango sure does have a violent streak, and I like it. And Miroku has one to match when it comes to his sister. Kaede sure is smart. It's nice to see them all on the same team. Nice twist that the whole accident event was a set up to get Kagome captured. Let's let her suffering draw out Inu's demonic blood. That would be too awesome.

Once again, great chapter! If you ever need any plot bunnies, I'm your girl.

Anxiously awaiting your next update.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

so i've sat here for the last twenty minutes trying to figure out just what the hell 524663 means. i've tried adding the numbers togetehr, i've tried mixing the letters coordinated with teh numbers into other prominant words of the fiction and i'm stumped. you got me. so you have me hanging patiently waiting to see just what's going on. can't wait to read more!! ja ne!

i'm not sure if i have yet to leave a review for the story. with the slim time i've had over this past week, i have been hopelessly addicted to reading this story. it's amazing, to state the obvious. the characters you have developed are wonderful and their personalities are believable. this is one story that i can see going many places; i am happy that it won reconition through the guild, congrats! you know, and i'm not sure if you should take this as an overrun college students dillusions (or lack there of sleep) but when you had kagome report to check the website for names of children hurt, i nearly did. (and i'm honestly not sure why). persusavie writing, i'll give it that. i have been dealing with the thought of Sango being killed and now that it has happened (or has it?) i'm near tears. a girl good at her job faces death because of it? oh, the injust way of life. ::sigh:: and kagome...tragic hero? maybe. she didn't acheive greatness though and nor did she work her way up to acheive nirvana (i really forget the real term for it, but basically to the highest she could be. had she of, she would have not been an agent). but she can, however, be a victim of the system. i think though her death would subtract from the plot and the defeat of Naraku. as so elequentiy stated (and i loved it), sesshoumaru is to busy between kagura's legs to get to naraku in time (though i have learned to trust the fluff) and inuyasha...well...it's inuyasha. not to mention, miroku's gonna die if he really killed sango by either inu or sesshiles hand. man, the drama circles only elongate in life, ne? GREAT story, keep it up!!!!

so this story is amazing. simply amazing. i kept seeing it sneaking up with more chapters but never got the time to actually read it. so i'm on chapter 7 and i just got to say your writing style is superb. the personifications, smilies and metaphores are amazing and the character developments is stunning. you have such great humor behind miroku and sango that i think it more well written then the series. i laughed, nearly cried even, when miroku ended in the car with sango and twisted her words to manipulate his way with her. amazing. you are most definitly a wonderful writer with a strong career ahead of you. keep it up!

wow that was awesome, i'm speechless. i'm at a loss for words that's how awesome it was. i can't wait till u update again i gotta know what happends to Kagome, please update soon.

I don't think I covered everything in my last review. OMG! Poor Inu and Kag's. They both just received distressing revelations. I hope Kag's comes out of the accident without any serious injuries. And who shot who. Don't say it was Sango that was shot! And poor Sess. Oh, please say that Kagura really got her heart back. The whole romantically heated relationship between those two is exhilerating. And, who has done this for her? So many mysteries. Perhaps I should read your notes afterall. Please update. The waiting is excrutiating.

Thanks,

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

I'm really enjoying this story, it has a really good story line and it flows nicely. I hope that you don't kill off Kagome, that would just be depressing... And I hope that Sango doesn't die and that Kagura gets her heart and stays with Sess and kills Naraku. Blagh what a mouthful.. Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!

ahhh noo Kagome cant die.. sooo sad.. her and Inuyasha belong together.. i knew her and Miroku were the assassins .. but still Kagome and Inuyasha belong together.. hell Even Sesshy knows that.. grrr lol anyways keep up the awesome work and update soon!

omg! i'm so glad u updated, awesome chapter btw, i've racked my brain and i can't think who the 2 twins are, when u say i know i'm gonna hit my hand against my forehead and be like i'm so stupid. but this has to be one of my most fave stories i love it. i can't wait till u update again hopefully soon. welcome back and take care!