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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You've sucked me in well and good with this plot. Now I'm totally wondering how you're gonna get Kagome to trust Inuyasha. And then there's the side issue of Sango and Miroku too :)
And is Kagome's father alive at all?
Hmm...
Please update soon.
And is Kagome's father alive at all?
Hmm...
Please update soon.
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
and the plot thickens... as for the cliffhanger... *sharpens knife* >:(
just kidding! yet another awsome chapter. can't wait for the next one!
just kidding! yet another awsome chapter. can't wait for the next one!
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I love it so far. The flow is nice and the spelling mistakes are minimal and easily overlooked. As for the story itself, I love the way you tell it and the concepts. Keep up the good work.
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October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this...especially the elevator scene in ch. 1. You're right, that is definately worth writing a story around! I can't wait to read more.
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October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, really great story so far! the first chapter was a bit confusing, but the second one cleared up a lot of things and now i'm hooked! can't wait to read more... i like how your stories are getting progressively darker and more complex. i just love your writing and it seems you improve with each story... anyhow, please update soon!
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October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey this is great i like it keep going with it and update soon please
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another story by nena!!
I like the beginning though you sd ged get a beta reader. Just small stuff, like "reported" instead of "reporter" (your summary and along the story) and "violate eyes" which I think you would mean "violet," yeah?
Why did Kagome take the gun?
Keep up the good work and more soon, please :)!
I like the beginning though you sd ged get a beta reader. Just small stuff, like "reported" instead of "reporter" (your summary and along the story) and "violate eyes" which I think you would mean "violet," yeah?
Why did Kagome take the gun?
Keep up the good work and more soon, please :)!